I love this fanfic! Its the best! And its very cute! I hope you make more NATM fanfics, they'll be awesome! I hope we can write a NATM fanfic together. I want to introduce to you my NATM OC's. The 1st OC, she's a night guard and her name is Samantha Daley, she's the niece of Larry Daley. The 2nd OC, she's an egyptian warrior; she's best friends with Ahkmenrah and Kahmunrah as well. Somehow she and Kahmunrah are more close friends. Her egyptian name is Maharib Qawiun, which means "Strong Warrior". I hope we can be friends! Keep up the good work!

Hiiii plz plz plz post the new chapter! I've fallen in love with ur idea of a story! Its so great to see that people share interests in something:D i really like ur style of writing so I hope u will upload soon:D

More please

Awwww... Kah's got a girlfriend!

Thats really brilliant you must continue!

continue soon please! i vote for her to be with kahmunrah more than ahkie. if you like kahmunrah more then i have a complete love story with him and an oc

Ooh I like it so far! :D

Another good chapter. Loved the stories they told, and the description you gave Nanu. Really great, can't wait for more! :D

I like this very much, one minor thing to watch out for. In egyptian myth, osiris was lord of the underworld. Anubis was a helper. He was basically in charge before osiris died, and anubis had to mummify him.

Hope that helps, and that you will update soon.

holy moly! Nanu is back! Yesss!

I hope you update i cant wait to see where this will go!

"It screamed at me, Amelia. That's how."

You, my friend, have made my day. XD

I really love the descriptions and your sense of humor was terrific. I also love the fact that this is a Kahmunrah/OC. I can't wait for more!