Absolutely lovely piece of writing, thank you so much for posting! Absolutely love it :)

Fantastic read! Great if your in the mood for cute and mushy

This is definitely one of the better Merlin fanfics I've read. It shows a very different view of what happened in the show and I quite like it.

That was really cute! I must admit, I haven't watched the series in a while so I was a bit confused as to what happens when but that's okay. I love how you made Arthur gradually figure out puzzle piece after puzzle piece! Nice! :)

I really enjoyed this! The progression was amazing and the gooey fluff at the end just made it worthwhile. Nicely done!

-Charmy

Oh my GOSH! This ranks high, high, HIGH up on my mental list of best fanfictions ever. I mean, Holy SHITE! I-You-This, speachless. So wonderful I'm speachless.

awe

And... wow. brilliantly emotional storyline. I could feel every sentence, wow. Um, can't say much beyond that.

I loved the basic structure; going through the episodes, bit by bit, worked delightfully: felt so realistic too, especially when the scenes were extended a little more. Enchanting.

And, yep, the ending was masterfully done. It's usually hard to bring the romance out of thoughts and to reality, but you managed that incredibly well.

Lovely story.

Oh, Arthur. XD So slow on the uptake, but once he gets there, he's THERE. I love getting Arthur's perspective on the relationship, since he's generally the one who's less emotionally forthcoming.

This is so good. Seriously, this is a rational fic from Arthur's point of view. And here I thought that I'd never find one. ;D

Really, though, I love this! :) I wish you would do this from Merlin's perspective, but no pressure. xD

Thanks for taking the time to share this! Best wishes~

I loved this story! You did a wonderful job of having Arthur recognize his feelings for Merlin and doing a slow buildup. I wish that the story had been longer though, because it was so good. It would be awesome if you did a version of this story from Merlin's point of view.

Awww! It's so cute! Possibly not what you're going for, but it is! I love it! But I would probably love it even more if it had Merlin's point of view as well. But still, awww!

It took him a long time, but it did set in.

This is your first fanfic of Merlin? My God, you did a wonderful job! It was so fun to read it, I really enjoyed it. I don't really care that Arthur was a bit OOC, it really fit in this story.

Definitely a favourite

awwww this is brilliant! :D