So, I read this out to my best friend and she cried. She only cries for good fanfiction, so there you have it.

It's beautiful :') Especially the ending.

aww that was soo sweet! really good :)

Good Godric I love this! Thank you and Trevor, and I guess, JKR should get a mention, because without her, we wouldn't have either of these people or that toad. I loved this. Very much. It was amazing. GREAT job!

Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. This story is beyond words, it really gets into Ron's head and just wow. Definatly in my top three favorites and I've read tons of Rermione

OHMYGOSH! :O

That's cute and sweet and smart! :D

I like the ending... very cute! ;)

Great job with showing how he feels about her - I think you nailed it perfectly! :D

awwww, that was so cuteeeee! :P

Love it. So perfectly executed, put a great big smile on my face!

Lplli xx

Great, except at the end you should have said he asked her 1 min 40 ago and everything else 1 min 38 ago, or else you're saying she said yes, etc, then two seconds later he asked her to marry him. Doesn't really make sense, does it? :)

I really enjoyed this (especially because I could almost see Ron reasoning with an invisible person, letting them into his head for a little while)...the only thing I didn't get was your seconds, at the end.

You mean to say that Hermione said "Yes" before Ron finished asking her to marry him? Needless to say, I'm not all that great at Math so I might just be confusing things but oh well, it was great anyway :)

That was a cute speech, and sweet ending.

I was surprised the worst moment wasn't leaving her during the Horcrux Hunt.

One correction, I think he had to have asked her to marry him 1 minute and 42 seconds ago, it just needs to be something longer than 1 minute 40 seconds when she said yes.

Cute story! I think you wrote Ron really well, but I still just have to guess why Trevor-the-toad getting lost so often was so important to their relationship. I think I kind of have an idea, but can't be sure.

This is a sweet story with a bit of that characteristic humor of Ron's, whose character I think you portrayed very well. Overall I quite enjoyed reading this. :)

Keep writing!

Fantastic, brilliantly written, humoirous and sweet!