Ah, this was so terribly heartbreaking! Through the whole thing my heart was hurting for Roy, poor poor thing. I wish Ed had stayed with him!

Beautiful work!

Oooh, I wish this was just a little longer. Otherwise, it was wonderful. This is mangaverse, correct? It's hard to find RoyEd in mangaverse, but this, with all its flow and emotion, was simple, ah, *squeal*, brilliant. A little overuse of the dramatic italics and '...'s, but the way the emotion played out covered it up here and there. Great fic, thanks for sharing! (:

really sad but beautifully written!