It is so sad yet cute :)

Great take the whole Bella in zombie mode.
I wonder if any of the Voltori had actual feeling's for bell in any of the books' or films'?

Simple and wonderful. Thank you.

i like this! i do feel bad that Bella cant see the truth

Well written, very subtle, and not too blunt. Thumbs up.

Btw, my old account was Imbartsimpsonwhothehellareyou.

i like the smooth detachment in each line. works like poetry. unique in it's own way and very YOU, if you get my notion. you're a talented person in all your Asian awesomeness.

Beautiful. Simpy beautiful.

This was really interesting.

I like how Caius is keeping her safe from Aro.

aww this was sweet. Are you going to keep writing or are you going to leave it as it is? Sorry that I am not signed on but I would like it very much if you could answer my question:) It sounds great!