Wonderful! No criticism to be given. This was a delightful read.

Your character building is nicely done

Wonderful. I love it how you can get in Anders' mind so well.

Wow, beautiful. Such great insight.

I love this fic and the depth you've given to Justice and his place in the Anders/Hawke relationship. It's gorgeous and I want this to be canon. I've downloaded it to my kindle so I can read it whenever I like!

I love the focus of Justice for this story. Often when I read DA2 Anders' its always from his point of view, with him being almost haunted. The slow evolution for Justice is beautifully written.

I always liked Justice and I thought it was a shame he wasn't added in DA2 as more then a villain. So good work, very enjoyable.

Kyo

This was beautiful. How you wrote Justice was immaculate, and the extent to which Justice and Anders were intertwined was amazing. Totally loved every moment of this fiction, and the insight you had on Justice was incredibly done and highly philosophical. I definitely want to see you write something for Inquisition when it comes out. :)

Overall, amazing!

I love how you wrote this from Justice's point of view and think you did a nice job explaining why he did the things he did. Usually what I find is either both Anders and Justice are the bad guys or Anders is the victim and Justice is still a bad guy. That he is evil for blowing up the chantry. I love how you explained the thought process that leading to the destruction of the chantry and why he tricked Hawke.

I also liked how you wrote your romance scenes, just enough to enjoy but not so much detail that I kip over paragraphs. (too much detail in the love scenes just makes me want to roll my eyes) I liked the balance. :)

Good Story!

Justice needed love too. Glad to find someone who thinks the same. )

Great story!

This is... so, so, so beautiful. Wonderful and amazing story.

And beautiful ending.

I really appreciate to you. I love your Hawk, Anders, and Justice. They are all adorable.

I really liked this story. Anders has been and probably will always be my favorite, followed by Justice in DA:A. I didn't like it that they seemed to portray Justice as a menace in the game and I don't generally like how he is in fanfics either. So I was looking for something like this and I really am glad that you wrote and took the time to post it.

I was so happy when Justice was going to be in DA2, yours is much better.

I love your excellent insights on the why things deteriorate with Justice and Elthina.

... Definitely glad you recommended this now.

This is probably in my top three favorites. Yes, for sure. I loved the last chapter. A lot. I had been hoping for something like it, and you did it so well that I didn't feel like anything was missing or anything. It was sweet, and not I thinkI like Justic even more. I really liked your personification of him - it fits almost perfectly with how I had imagined him (And you make him more sane than most see to, which is nice). The bit at the end with the 'too/two' was cute. And well... I just liked it a lot. It built up nicely and the last part was perfect, especially to wrap things up.