Reviews for Who's Son? |
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eeveefem chapter 23 . 11/26/2019 this cool story I hope that it's more chapters in the future |
sapphireash chapter 2 . 7/22/2019 loving the story so far, and I know it's been a long time since you updated, however, I noticed a spelling error in the second to last paragraph. It stuck out to me, and I don't know if it's the only one, but I prefer to let people know, because I like to be told when I make mistakes. Here it is: "Lily hided it from me!" Hided isn't a word, the past tense of Hide, is hid. |
dips96 chapter 23 . 1/7/2018 Wow this is great I find it really rare to find a story this good. I hope you get to continue it. |
Guest chapter 2 . 1/6/2018 Why are the chapters so short? It’s really annoying to have to load a new chapter every three minutes. |
hotcat chapter 23 . 11/8/2016 good work. Hope you continue this |
9Dragons chapter 23 . 7/2/2016 This was a great story. I hope you continue this story. |
kamui5 chapter 23 . 2/13/2016 Fantastic chapter keep up the good work I love it :D |
Skyeleaf1956 chapter 23 . 11/8/2015 Would like to see this continue. |
vgriffin4 chapter 23 . 3/7/2015 SORRY FOR SOME REASON MY LOGIN DIDN'T REGISTER AND MY REVIEW CAME UP AS GUEST. YES I JUST REVIEWED THE STORY. THE ONE IN ALL CAPS. AGAIN CAN'T WAIT FOR THE UPDATE. GREAT STORY GOOD WORK. |
Guest chapter 23 . 3/7/2015 PLEASE EXCUSE THE CAPS. I HAVE A HARD TIME SEEING WHAT I TYPE. THAT SAID ON WITH THE REVIEW. I LOVE THE STORY. IT'S KIND OF A NEW TAKE ON THE FATHER SON IDEA. STILL A SNARKY SNAPE BUT WITH THE UNDERLYING CARING FOR HARRY. YOU DON'T TAKE AWAY FROM THE ACTUAL SNAPE CHARACTER. BUT YET YOU ARE ADDING THE CARING SIDE OF A TRUE FATHER IN THE MAKING. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER JUST TO SEE HOW SNAPE HANDLES THE TRI WIZARD HARRY SIRIUS YEAR AT HOGWARTS. PLEASE KEEP UP YOUR WORK, YOU ARE A TALENTED STORY TELLER. THANKS FOR THE ENTERTAINMENT! |
starie78 chapter 23 . 3/6/2015 Great story, would love to see it continued. |
katelaina1717 chapter 23 . 3/1/2015 Please update soon, very original and captivating fic indeed. I hope for slash and mpreg with Harry later lol, overprotective daddy Severus will be too funny:D |
a kitsune's light chapter 23 . 6/17/2014 Awesome story! Please update soon! |
Meridian chapter 23 . 6/13/2014 Thank you for updating- it's a great chapter! |
leylinjan chapter 1 . 5/24/2014 hmm I should tell you that it's 'Whose son?' and not 'Who's son?' which would be short for 'Who is son?' and doesn't really make any sense... |