Oh, the ending was hilarious for this chapter! Made me burst out laughing. Hope I didn

You need to put in paragraphs, check spelling and punctuation and grammar and generally proof read. You called Phillipe Raoul.

Oh, I so adore Charles Dance's phantom. It's my favorite adaptation. It's always thrilling to find a fanfiction based on it. I like this so far. The point of view thing is a little unusual, but it's still well written, so I can't complain. I usually am put off by extended paragraphs, as they make my head spin. But these aren't excessively long, so I can deal. Great work so far. :)

Actually, the pantomime characters (as I know them, anyway,) are Harlequin & Columbine, Puchinello & Puchinella, and Pierrot & Pierrette.

Loving this story, the 1990 version was and is one of my favourites.

and I certainly had no intention of cross-dressing! That line caught me off guard and had me laughing out loud because all I could hear in my mind is Charles Dance's voice saying that and then all of a sudden an image of Charles Dance's Erik in a dress popped into my mind.

I really liked this story it made me cry but ** 8 mad me so happy.

You are a good writer, just continue and learn all you can and who knows

maybe someday you may become the writer you wish to be.

good so far, please continue, Christine needs to grow up

some people have scares on the outside some deep within

some people are just plane scarey some are just mean

Eric acts and does what he has been taught

Really good story btw! However i think there should be more dialogue though but its really well written and you should be proud for creativity. Happy writing! Xx

Meg, Madam Giry, Raoul are not in this version, if you have seen the 1990s movie or even the play you would know this. Count Philippe de Chandon is Raoul's replacement in this one. If your going to base it on the Yeston and Kopit phantom then please get the characters right.

I love your story, Charles Dance is my favorite Phantom (and I've seen/read ten different versions!). The story by Edgar Allen Poe that Red Death is in is 'the Masque of the Red Death'. I just realized that this story hasn't been updated for over nine years, so I doubt you'll get this, much less reply. I still love your story so far.

I just wanted to say that I very much enjoy your story. Also, the Red Death in Edgar Allen Poe's story is a symbol he uses for the plague. However, it appears in The Masque of the Red Death. Once again, you've written a nice story.

Wow this was a really good fic I absolutley love the 1990 version but didn't like how it ended.

You had me crying there in the end *sniff*

This was cute beyond words, but the ending was decidedly rushed.

I wanted a *lot* more fluff there at the end, and you just dismissed the whole thing with a one-line about "...my husband, Erik."

Wah! Give us fluff!

What a wonderful story! I loved the mini-series and I thought that your fic was a terrific addition to it. An enjoyable read!

I love this story! Chapter 7 is so sad!