Beautiful connection. :)

This is very good. But I think I would prefer either all "I'm"s or all "I am" and not switchng back and forth. I do really lik it though.

Other then all of the "I am"s I can't seam to figure out why Moses's story comes to mind as well as the song "I am/Shades of Life". If you haven't heard the song then you should listen to it.

I absolutely enjoyed this! Thank you for sharing this with us!

Lovely.

Great story! I think it might be better if it was all "I am"'s instead of the occasional "I'm". Might help build up momentum. Still love it, though. Thanks for writing this. God bless!

Another nice Bible-Narnia X-over. I loved the "I am Myslef" parts.

WRITE ON!

Wow! I am... speechless! So amazing! Such an incredible job! I love this! So beauteous!

-Austra

awww I love it:D Very very Good!

Halulija he is risen!

I don't have anything eloquent to say about your eloquence. I like it. Just wanted to let you know.

Lion's mane, that's beautiful! I love how you ended all the stanzas with "I am Myself", reflecting us back to the passage in HHB where that's what he tells Shasta. Although I liked every line in this, my very favorite was the last one.

I am Beauty,

I'm Terrible,

I am not "safe",

but I am good.

I am Myself.

It really gets the true awesomeness of Aslan across, with all the best lines Lewis used to describe him. No one ever saw anything more terrible or beautiful...not safe, but he's good. *sigh* Well done, indeed. Thanks for a splendid reminder that the God we serve is Real, Powerful, and Himself (which is all he needs to be). :)