Excellent story! Really enjoyed it! Almost made you feel like you were there with Harry in the Outback. Enjoyed how you developed Harry's character and gave him a great deal of maturity, which can only come from loving family and experience. Enjoyed the different magic. I thought Harry trying to teach Gred and Forge was hilarious. That addition of the female Centaur foal was pretty cool, too. Enjoyed all of the attention to detail. I know you don't like to revisit stories, but perhaps you could do a series of one-offs based on this one? It's quite fantastic!

This was pretty good, learning a little about the australian society made me curious about it. I'm even listening to aboriginal didgeridoo music.

I never read something quite like this, the way you write and make the story roll. I find it unique

Great idea! Very original to me and with the amount i read that is saying somrthing!thanks for sharing!

another great one, the language was harder to read but made it more authentic

This brought back memories of junior high in the 70s.

Great writing but I thought I had read a longer version or something very similar somewhere.

Groaned at the pun. Definitely wasn't expecting this to be a Shaggy Dog Story. Not bad, though.

Cute! A very different Harry. Love the cameos from Croc Dundee!

This is fantastic. I don't know enough about aboriginal culture to say much, but I like this version of Harry. Just so casually enigmatic and quietly amused at most everything. Also, I appreciate the calm pragmatism you've given him. Wish there was more to the story.

I love how the story’s tone feels very Aussie. Laid back, practical, taking things as they are. It captures a culture and a mood.

I enjoyed it immensely...I only wish there was more of it!

Thanks for writing!

Found this by accident and it was great well done

Nice, very well written.

I going to see if you have more than year one written if not please write up more. Nice cameo of mic dundee.

I love this wonderful wonderful story.

Sequel?