Reviews for Revealed Identities
Bookwyrm chapter 17 . 8/2
And when the Emperor is pissed, planets are destroyed.
bruceleeroythelastdragon chapter 25 . 3/21
Awsome FREAKING STORY! Would love to see more!
MagmaFist chapter 11 . 7/12/2019
Great story! The noghri must have been very confused when he sensed Vader's presence on Leia too. xD
CharlieBoneFan chapter 25 . 4/8/2019
Good job!
Ommallaredpanda chapter 22 . 11/22/2017
I need Ani to give Han the Dad Talk.
Ommallaredpanda chapter 17 . 11/21/2017
Ani: Oi! Wrinkles!
Palpi: Wuh?
Ani: You like this dress? I like how it looks on meh!
Palpi: You like mah lipstick an' nailpolish?
Ani: Ermahgerd yeeeerrrrrrs!
Palpi: hurhsnsnnnnn!

I don't know.

Don't ask.
Ommallaredpanda chapter 16 . 11/21/2017
You know, you should make more of a deal of the whole "ex-Sith" thing. Cus, for one, you aren't supposed to be able to turn back in the first place. Two, it should have been way harder.
Ommallaredpanda chapter 14 . 11/21/2017
Yay!

Oh, and can we please have a sort of thing about how Vader has messy hair, cus that always makes me laugh XD
Ommallaredpanda chapter 13 . 11/21/2017
Why?

Mara is a piece of shit, plus, having more than one redemption arc is very tricky.

However, you should have made her more formidable.

That's the one thing I dislike about your writing: you brush over things and don't give anything much meaning. It's like you're rushing the story. You are a good writer, I just think you should read a large amount more of professionally written books to increase your skills. It helped me an awful lot!
Ommallaredpanda chapter 12 . 11/21/2017
"hey Luke-y boy!"
"... Yeah?"
"Leia is yo sis!"
"..."
"..."
"..."
"Yo sis be hot!"
"Oh shit incest! Dad! Forgiveness!"
Ommallaredpanda chapter 11 . 11/21/2017
256...

Good on you, Ani!
Ommallaredpanda chapter 9 . 11/21/2017
A wookiee fury hug. Now THAT is what I wanna see. Like Vader crushing people with hugs and hugging Admirals' necks (he has a neck fetish from now on) and like a battle of the hugs between him and da Chew-monster.

My mind!

(Laughs manically)
Ommallaredpanda chapter 8 . 11/21/2017
Mental image from that:

Vader sitting at a booth with an extremely tacky and cheesy, brightly coloured rainbow sign saying "free hugs"
Then a line of Rebels (like Ackbar and Han and Wedge) all lining up and grinning benovelently/evilly.

I am now going to draw my arse off.
Ommallaredpanda chapter 7 . 11/21/2017
Yes! Ani! We're getting to consuming guilt and angsty feels, aren't we?
Ommallaredpanda chapter 5 . 11/21/2017
So... He's still not suicidally guilty over shit. What's happened?

You not woman enough to make our poor baby hurt, hmm?

The angst side,power in you have not.

Abandoned you, the feels have.

Joined the moral side, you have.
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