Reviews for Outside the Box
narsuess chapter 7 . 1/15
Ok gotta say this chapter is hilarious, belly laugh hilarious.
It makes me want you to be my bestie, cause you're crazy like that
petmom1213 chapter 11 . 10/9/2019
This was so good. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I know its been awhile but an epilogue would still be great.
Mickey Hall
BurchGirl chapter 11 . 6/1/2019
I just found this. Wow! Loved it. Hope you add more. Brilliant story!
acw1 chapter 11 . 9/16/2018
:)

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Nicoconsd chapter 11 . 4/3/2018
I'm so glad I found this, it was so much fun and I loved all the giggles while reading. :)
JK chapter 11 . 4/27/2017
THAT WAS A SERIOUSLY HORRIBLE LEMONWHAT WAS ALL THAT TALKING? poems? other people? it was fucking weird...nothing hot about it
jk chapter 9 . 4/27/2017
if that's how a dude treats you when he loves you, I'm not interested. He says he loves bella but hes dating other girls and fucking around. Is that love? I don't fucking think it is. Well I guess you can love someone and not know HOW to love someone. And what was that weird shit with bella? Did you really have her fucking dress up as someone else and try to seduce a dude that has A MOTHER FUCKING GIRLFRIEND? THAT WHOLE CHAPTER WAS JUST SHIT TOSS IT
jk chapter 7 . 4/27/2017
bella is making a HUGE motherfucking mistake by moving in with a guy she wants even though hes a used up whore and HAS A FUCKING GIRLFRIEND!
jk chapter 6 . 4/27/2017
whoreward really has a fucked up way of letting bella know that he likes her...getting it on with irina and then he fucks Chelsea...what a nasty piece of shit!

bella should be so motherfucking DONE with his ass!

and he totally needs to be checked for stds
jk chapter 4 . 4/26/2017
I stopped liking Edward the second he decided to fucking cook for some hoe in bellas kitchen. That would have been it for me!
kelley turner chapter 11 . 2/27/2017
Write more please and thank you
agoogoo chapter 4 . 1/6/2017
i'm in the middle of the chapter, and i must say, i don't think i've ever liked an Edward as much as i like this Edward here
three colors chapter 11 . 7/30/2016
Ugh trolls. This was a great story! (A few years late)
SaskiaB chapter 7 . 6/12/2016
FREAKING LOVE THIS... Laughed my ass off... CH7
DMBSJB18 chapter 11 . 12/28/2015
You are getting hate from trolls? That makes me sad. This story was amazing. So, so amazing. Thank you for sharing it!
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