Hahahaha
Kaname's pick up lines just escalated to seduction.
Zero likkkkeeeesssssss it though

Fuckkkk! That's so beautiful yet hot. AHHHHHHHHH I think its cute too!

This story was the best. Keep up the good work.

OMG That was perfect.

Amazing!~~~''

I wouldn't have even made it to his sex joke arsenal. The Lucky Charms one made me have to take a breather.

Holy crap, this gave me a heart attack. I was just waiting for Zero to shoot him. Kaname needs to chill. XD

Did kaname seriously do that he seriously could have been shot and maybe even killed by zero he is lucky got out alive

could be great to answer kuran question ) maybe in a next ?
Maid me laught! ˆ ˆ

I nearly coughed a lung up laughing at Kaname's lame pick-up lines. They were so bad i couldn't help but laugh.

thank you this made my day!

haha yeahh, you're totally right. even the cheesiest of pick-up lines would be made into the sexiest words ever if it was kaname saying them! XD
ha, and i know how you feel. this guy was going around spouting cheesy-as pick-up lines, and like wtf? .

To funny...died laughing...can't stop...if you want to help make another one so I can stop to read it... :D XD X'D

ha ha i loved that poem or story it was so funny

What else would be in his pocket if he's not carring his gun? I dont understand anymore. Can you explain it to me. Other then that this was a great fanfic. Hope you write more.