Reviews for Strawberry Fields Forever
Suilven chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Oh my! Loghain and Teagan and Joss... wow. Serious hot stuff happening there. Loved the Beatles references. ;)
Herebedragons66 chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
That was adorable. And "why don't we do it in the road" made me LOL! Nice reference.
tgail73 chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Holy hell Shakespira! That was amazingly hot!

Loghain will no doubt be thinking of things to apologize for while he's in Orlais. Joss and Teagan are berry, berry lucky(heehee).

This might actually top your stories of Riordan/Leonie/Duncan. Hmmm...very close.
Persephone Chiara chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
Daaaaaaaaaaaamn it, woman! This made me want to smoke a PACK of cigarettes, not just ONE. Nyargh, evil genius. That's what you are. I'll come back when I can think coherently again.

As in...in a year or so.
Eva Galana chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
I enjoyed this. Loghain can apologize to me any time he wants!

But, now, my dear Shakespira, you have committed yourself to a wedding trip story to Orlais. *cheeky grin*
Enaid Aderyn chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Holy crap. First ‘Peacocks’ and now this. Would you kindly explain just how you always manage to turn what should have been a crackfic threesome into utter hotness that actually feels plausible? Granted you have the advantage of an exquisite feel for Loghain, but wow. *fans self* Does he really have to go to Montisimmard? ;)

Not only that but the overall atmosphere is perfectly in keeping with WNI’s delightfully intelligent lightheartedness, whereas Leonie’s hot threesomes carried the haunting poetry of her milieu. You are just amazing.

And yes, multiple Beatles refs for the win. “Why don’t we do it in the road.” made me spit on my monitor, thank you very much! XD
Ventisquear chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Briliant way to teach Loghain apologize. :D
lisakodysam chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Yippee! A Shakespira NSFW one-shot! *Jumps up and down and claps*

Someone's Beatles influences are showing! Strawberry fields, The fool on the hill...those were the only two I spotted! Are there more? I'm going to have to read it again, now! (For the third time) Gah!

I steeled myself today not to drink any tea while reading one of your stories and it's lucky I didn't because I sniggered pretty much throughout. This, though: 'The bann probably had his sword drawn...That was not what he had drawn. Loghain slammed his eye shut and continued to show the mage just how manly he was...' had me howling.

And then the hot, funny and - have I said hot? - menage-a-trois with Loghain fighting against it but not fighting TOO hard. Wonderfully reminiscent of Leo, Duncan and Riordan and yet different. And, my God...the thought of Maric's golden head bent over in front of Loghain...*tremble*

A wonderful surprise to come home to - I demand more!
Tyanilth chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Gauntlet valiantly accepted and challenge completed with honour. :)

Can't wait to see what you're going to do with your second challenge :P
The Lilacgirl chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
HAWT! Amazing job, I love it!

So, so , so amazingly hawt!
Kira Tamarion chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Now, that was sooo totally amazing. You madam are brilliant. I may need to take a cold shower, and then put myself in the freezer.

Great premise! I love Joss.
Jinx1983 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
WOW!...You have this cheeky monkey completely and utterly speechless.

Well done..I salute you. You have more than just shocked and amazed the holy hell out of me with this challenge. I am sure that Loghain has quite a long list of apologies ready for them once they get there.

This was brilliant, Thanks a bunch for writing it and for so astonishingly rising up to the challenge that only the smuttiest of monkeys are able to present, you are without a doubt one of the most talented and gifted authors I have seen in a long time..

The Goddess Smut Monkey bows in your honor.

Jinx
Nithu chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Oh, you write threesomes so well! This was wonderful, very different in atmosphere to the Leonie/Duncan/Riordan ones you've done before. I'm amazed at how you manage to interject humour, without losing any of the intensity.

'The bann probably had his sword drawn. That was not what he had drawn.' Had me cracking up!
Josie Lange chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Well, well, that certainly set the bar very, very high for me. I hope I can at least come within the ballpark! How many words do I have? 1495? Better get writing...that damn bus waits for no one!

All I can say is "oh my goodness". I think Loghain is going to spend much of his trip to Montsimmard dreaming up things to apologize for. I poisoned your brother, Teagan. Oops, my bad, sorry about that. Joss, did I send an Antivan Crow after you? I know he failed but I DID OK his employment. Again, so sorry. Here's my crotch. On fire. Put it out. :p

I see that I have my work cut out for me, but hey, that's what friends are for, right? We push each other to get better and if one of us should happen to get hit by a random bus (or, who am I kidding, get thrown under it), we make sure the other is OK before we start pointing and laughing. ;)

That was very well done! Bravo on meeting the challenge with valor and honor!
celtic-twinkie chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
HOly shit! tHIS is hawt! *fans self You captured Loghain perfectly (so did Teagan...with his mouth) haahahahahahahaha

Great job, asusual :)