Wow, I remember reading this story in high school! It’s still as good as I remember it being, and I’d absolutely love to see what happens next!

HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO US!? This story is incredible and fun and so just awesome! How can you leave us ending here! Sarah and Jareth haven't even kissed yet! Please finish this story!

This story is amazing! I love the way you portray your characters - especially Jareth - and that you have maintained a lot of the original elements from Labyrinth but have made it your own piece that is so creative and funny and captivating and impossible to stop reading! You write so well - please continue the story and don't give up on it!

What was Arden's plan for Sarah that he told Karen he'd abandon?

Keep going with it

Looking at the last update I truly wish you could finish the story. It is very well written and captivating

Okay, I'm hanging here! Out of curiosity, do you plan to finish this story? I'm definitely interested in seeing how it ends. :)

Honestly can't remember if I've reviewed your work before or not, but I do very much so love your writing style. The story you have created is enchanting with enough elements from the original to keep things coherent and on track, but without distracting from your own. I am looking forward to further chapters. I do know it has been a long while since you last updated and I do hope that this story hasn't been abandoned for whatever reason. Take care!

Please update soon.
The suspense is killin me.
It has almost been a whole year since you last updated, so please add more chapters or could you tell the viewers if you are going to continue the story or if you aren't.!

I was wondering if Menelaus had lost his marbles.

Will we get to see the repercussions of Arden's selfish stupidity?

Yay! More Sarah-and-Jareth fluff!

This story is so great and original, I hope you decide to continue it. I'm dying to know what happens next ;)

can i just say that i've now read your entire story and i love it! I was a little hesitent at first, how you changed the story line, and the era its set it...but it is now one of my favorite stories! (I like it better than your other story too and i enjoyed that one as well) I hope you will update soon:)) Love angry Jareth...someone should just stick Prince Arden and King Menelaus in a room and hope neither comes out alive :))
and hopefully Jareth will Save the Day!

me would really really REALLY like an update soon...

I have not lost hope!

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I read this whole story yesterday in one sit because it was so great! Please update it again soon. I really do love it!

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