So awesome

This is great

Yeah Percy, don't be so harsh on the person who is the sole responsible for all this ! It's not like it's her fault !
... Oh wait it is.

No she doesn't love Percy. She may desire him or be obsess by him but it's not love. If she did loved him she would have put his happiness over hers and wouldn't have told Zeus.
As for the fact that she "is sincere" as you said, it doesn't change the fact that she is responsible for basically the start of a world war and the death of who knows how many because she is a petty and shallow bitch. So even if she wants to make amend it doesn't change the fact that she should be punish and the way you handle things is both childish and naive. Frankly, it was pretty bad.

Yum yum

way to rushed. it has a good plot but you need to sleep or down. A: there's little context to the plot. B: chapter three and they are already in love. Artemis would never fall in love at first sight she would fight it or outright deny it first

woulda named her Crescent

Serious dath Vader moment at the beginning

Sudden flashback to to darth Vader saying to Luke 'LUKE I AM YOUR FATHER'.

After all that, I would behead Hecate for that. Remove the curse or die. She has no right to withhold her natural state.
Overall this story was rushed and didn’t make a lot of sense. Stupid decisions made by smarter people. That usually happens when the author isn’t as intelligent as the characters are supposed to be. An author can only write intelligence up to their own level. You can dumb yourself down, but you can’t go the other way.

I don’t buy it. It’s the same shitty excuse snape uses. There is no need to go so far. There was no need whatsoever for Artemis to say those things about an innocent girl. Especially her own daughter. It was. NEEDLESSLY cruel. Your reasons are stupid.

Zoe after Zoe nightshade.

Wow impressive

Hecate, she was born a goddess, she shouldn’t have to prove anything for you to remove your damn curse. Percy should smite the bitch for her even having the gall to say such bullshit. Hecate has no right and percy should respond appropriately. Every child of Hecate should be born deaf, blind, and dumb until they prove worthy of their normal born gifts. That’s what she wants isn’t it?

This story was ok for plot. I dont agree with a lot of what happened or don’t think reactions would have happened the same way. So I feel like this entire thing was just mediocre at best. It’s also labeled as complete but does not feel that it is. The rushed incomplete feeling ending hurts the story.

Before I will give it to her?