This is possibley the funniest story ive read hahaha (please excuse my terrible spelling if i got any words wrong)

oh my gosh i think that is one of the cutest things i have ever read in my life. Roxas Sora and Riku where hilarious and the ending was just perfect. I think you have a real chance to be a great fanfic writer I suggest that you don't spend so long on the clothing descriptions it can get a little boring after a while but apart from that i really don't have any complaints.

Haha! Dis is so cute and funny! :)

Amazing. I truly wish there were more chapters.

hahaha i loved it...nd roxas's nickname...lol "Roxie"

That was one amazing one-shot dude

I mean wow, just wow!O.O

There are no words to describe this is how awesome it is!

The interaction between Sora, Roxas and Riku was hilarious!LOL!

But also had a touch of something we call where I live "A Viajera" witch mean it was like totally high moment when those guys appear. Either the whole three, or just Roxas and Riku, or even Sora alone. Lets just say it was cool;)

As for the romance, loved it, very deep right there, I can say I found it romantic, fluffy, adorable, sweet, and a little spicy too.;3 I loved Sora and Kairi together and the way you wrote them was great!Cuddles and cookies for ya!

I also love they side Rokunami and Rixion, I like them too,

The writing was great and the story was in the words of Roxas and Riku here "MAGNIFICENT!" LOL!

Seriously I love the story , the characters and everything in it, thank for writing this it really made my day.w

I really enjoyed this, it made me smile. You made Sora adorable and the SoKai was so cute! Well done. :)

awesoem!

BAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHA! *is dying of laughter on the floor* I can't even comment on how fluffy that was cuz' of those two! PFFFTT! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

lol at Roxas and Riku at the end XDDDD im just like Sora, Roxas and Riku when it comes to pranks and messing around, but im most like Kairi: adores the beaches' beauty, has some friends that convince her to do stuff with them, and physical appearance, minus the redwine straight hair and indigo eyes! XD i loved every minute reading this! :D

It's raining fish!

I hate fish. They're so... squirmy and wriggly and eww... xD

And and old acoustic guitar, a dark raven in colour? I should've expected that :P

This is an exception, although i mostly like Roxas/Sora since Sora's just too innocent :D

And cute xD

But this really made me laugh! Good job; and u better write more :)

My sister saw me laughing and after a whike she told me:

I know you're crazy, you don't have to show me, idiot.

And it was the part where Sora and Kairi run into each other so i just laughed more while trying to retort xD

Amazing story! :D

AWWWWWWWWWWWW! That was incredibly cute

and your a pretty good writer! I want to read more of your stuff :D