I ended the story thinking "So cute! That's just soooo cute!" Seriously, it was my first thought! And I loved it *-* It was one of the simplest yet beautiful stories I've ever read! :D
Takano and Ritsu are sooooo perfect together! TTuTT I LOVE THEM SO SOOOO MUCH ** Waaaaaaa \o\ *heart attack and faint* Too much emotions heheh n.n"
Well, loved your story! Great job :3
Kissuuuus

Loved this!

This was so sweet. I loved, especially the ending.

I have finally read this beautiful, beautiful story. *o*

( I'm so sorry it took me so long, I'm actually stalking your profile right now! :D XD )

This was a short story that really...'reached' for something in my heart. We're always reaching for something in our lives, right? I mean, I reach to become a better writer, and there are lots of things that you want to reach for, too, yeah? (:

This was really adorable and all around just very heartwarming. (:

Decided to check out more of your stories :P

I like this, its simple and sweet, a hint of longing in Takano's character, which is understandable.

i do hope you continue to write for sekai ichi hatsukoi. Also, you dont have to respond to any of my reviews, since i know it can be a hassle. :3

-Emma

I think what I appreciate the most about your writing is that you don't let it drag on for too long. Rather than mincing words and complicating a very simple situation, you tell it as it is, and still with your personal flare.

Despite this story being extremely short (unfair to us, you know! :(), I loved it.

It's a snippet of Masamune's mind, and that doesn't come by very often, so I appreciated the fact that you gave a perspective that doesn't get light often. It shows almost how much Masamune cared about Ritsu, although Ritsu didn't know it then. It's a very lighthearted, fluffy thing, and while the resonance still lingers in my mind, if I close my eyes I can see pink. Seriously. I can see pink.

Your writing in present tense is what I've always admired. I always end up making many mistakes with tense confusion, but you do it effortlessly. This, for instance, is just pure genius.

It was a really good decision to change Masamune to Takano at the end there, because it's like a return to reality without having to put those mundane 'FLASHBACK' labels that many people use and abuse lately. :)

I'm starting to think you'll never disappoint me. ;)

This story is beautifully introspective. The theme around the word "reach" signifies Takano's and Onodera's relationship and the rift between them that they are trying to overcome. Takano's reflection is something I love to read and your take on his character was something I am in awe in. Do write more.

The first thing I said to myself, "Uhh...that's it?" You write very well and it seemed like a promising story, but it seems really short and didn't really leave me wanting more at the end. Although, I would read more of it. Still, I enjoyed it. You should def add more or create a longer piece! ;)

Awwww super cute!

I loved this one-shot . Love this couple and series so much 3. Hope to read more from you :)

This was really good, but you should write more to it :D. That would make me happyyy :).

Love that :I

I don't have too much to say since this is too short. Buy.. i dunno. When I read the sentence "Ritsu always seemed to be reaching for something out of touch" I melt inside D:

Well.. That.

Write more for this fandom! I'd do it but I only write in spanish.

Beautiful fic.

-Kei

Oooh~ lovely! I love how you describe Ritsu's always reaching out something that he can't really reach xD

In the past, it's always Ritsu who's always reaching out to Takano, but now it's Takano who has to reach to him :D good luck Takano-san!

I really enjoyed this short but sweet fic! I love Sekaiichi Hatsukoi and was thrilled to see this story..You described a moment and a memory between Onodera and Takano beautifully..You were able to portray the feeling of longing and desire present in both characters perfectly and in such enthralling detail despite this being a short one-shot..I would be thrilled to see you continue on with this fic or create a new Sekaiichi Hatsukoi fic focused on the relationship between Onodera and Takano..You seem to have an incredible understanding of the amazing dynamic that exists between them so I would love to read more..Fantastic job! _

AWWWWW! this is actually good... wow, you should do a sewuel of it... i like how u describe everything perfectly..