That was a uniquely sweet and insightful fiction, and the ending was just about perfect. I cannot communicate how glad I am to find a fiction that is so consistently good and well-researched that didn't end with a treacly sweet promise to be married when they're old enough, or something of the like. Excellent. Can't wait to read more of your work!

This is pure prussianess .Will you be continuing it?

awwww cute

That... That was just... DEAR LORD THAT WAS SO AMAZING! It was the perfect mix of cute and blood and sadness and education and everything! 3

Ah yes, the French translations... Lovely to have some of it in French and all that but without the English translations at the bottom it means naught. Google translate is good and all but it's not all that good _ Plus the fact that you'd constantly have to 'copy', 'alt tab' and 'paste'. Takes away from the enjoyment of reading it (having translations at the bottom to scroll down to is easier than having to do that). But other than that *grins* it's fabulous! Though one has to wonder what would have happened if Francis had succeeded in 'saving' Arthur XP

Hostile little England.

He was so cute in your fic. It's nice to see a story as long as this about when France and England met.

It's also interesting how you explored the immortality issue~

:) So interesting to read! Really enjoyed, hope you add more soon.

It's so intense like D: the deaths are so hard every time, I can see the red...

Thanks for updating! And hey, Scotland Ireland and Wales, you better stop picking on him, or else I might have to get Elizabetas frying pan!

Aww!

Wow this story is amazing. I can't wait for the second part.

Wow o.o I have nothing to say... just...wow xD It was completely stunning OwO At first I was confused when you switched the point of view, but I managed to get used to it. I really liked this chapter ) But you need to make some corrections to the French sentences Can I correct them for you ? )(I'm French, but since my English is awfully bad, I guess it's not really surprising :'D)

"Qu'est-ce que vous ?" doesn't mean anything " You wanted to say "What are you ?"... it's not easy to translate that in French. But I guess you could say "Qu'est-ce que tu es ?"... but I think it's VERY strange " ... "Qui es-tu" is better, but it means "Who are you"... :X

"Si seulement vous pouviez me dire qui vous êtes.." It's correct. But I think Francis should say "Tu" and not "vous". He's talking to a child. "Tu" is more casual. So Francis should say "Si seulement tu pouvais me dire qui tu es..."

"Ici" Here. It doesn't work that way in French. "Ici" does mean "here", but... not this kind of "here"... eer it's not easy to explain xD. For example, you say "ici" when you want to say "What are you doing here ?"...

If Francis wants to give something to Arthur, he has to say "Tiens" ) It means 'here'

"Ne lâchez pas" Again, it's correct. But again, Francis is talking to a child, so he should say "Ne me lâche pas !" or "Ne lâche pas !"

"tu es ca va" ...it doesn't mean anything. You wanted to say "Are you okay/all right" ? . You have to say "Tout va bien ?" or "Est-ce que ça va/est-ce que tout va bien ?" :)

I hope theses corrections were useful to you

I can't wait for the next chapter )

(And sorry again for the bad English)

Holy crap, that was intense. And even though I usually bristle hearing mentions of France touching England in any way shape or form- that was really heart wrenchingly good!

I could see everything- it was so vivid, adorable, humorous, and also extremely...moving, of course! Great job! To you both!