Reviews for Why Won't You Smile? |
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MintMousse chapter 1 . 4/27/2017 well thay was rapey. -.- |
yokishko chapter 1 . 5/4/2015 Just wanted to point out that "Yamamoto" is his surname and "Takeshi" is his given name. In Japan people always say their names surname first before given names, and similar in custom to England they usually call each other by their surnames unless they feel close enough to a person to call them by their given name (or unless they are given permission to call another by their given name)... Sometimes even two people who are dating still call each other by their surnames with a suffix depending on how formal they want to be |
tsunasoraceillover chapter 16 . 1/6/2014 This is really cute |
Alternate Code chapter 1 . 12/24/2013 Just an FYI, if you're writing by 'first name last name' then you got Yamamoto's wrong. It'd be Takeshi Yamamoto. Takeshi is Yamamoto's first name. Thusly when Tsuna greeted him he should be saying "Yamamoto-kun" (with or without the '-kun') and Yamamoto correcting him saying "Call me Takeshi." Personally that seems a little fast to me. The Japanese don't use first name basis easily. It's usually reserved for family–of course–and close friendships or relationships. But I guess it kind of works with this story seeing that Yamamoto is a rare person who understands Tsuna. That aside, I like the story so far! |
Toolazytologin chapter 14 . 7/15/2013 I know this is a harem for tsuna... But why is it that hibari's always get jealous? Sometimes tsuna need to be jealous too.. -.- it's kinda getting boring... Can't you think of other plots? |
BlackTearAngel chapter 16 . 4/15/2013 I so want more! And loved the lemon it was fabulous darling just fabulous! |
Reborn as Scientific Project chapter 16 . 3/12/2013 Good. Update Come Back to Me soon. Grazie. -Reasct |
Soul Vrazy chapter 16 . 4/29/2012 Hey when the next chapter going out? please make it quick~ Ciao~ |
Jexington chapter 16 . 3/14/2012 i take back my other review and say thank u~ and i also wish u good luck on writing the next chapter! kisses and hugs, Ajaxs |
cloud guardian reika-chan chapter 1 . 12/26/2011 umm.. Takashi is his first name... |
Koyuki11 chapter 16 . 12/1/2011 There are just so many questions unanswered that it's a cliffhanger. I'm definitely looking forward to reading the sequel. Great work and I'm sure I'll see more. |
YuukiRitsuka chapter 16 . 10/31/2011 tsuna~~ y u leave hibari TT next chap! |
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 16 . 10/23/2011 Giotto is protective...Poor Hibari,thats alot said and he shouted...I feel bad... |
LazySloths chapter 16 . 10/22/2011 I am in LOVE with this story! Im sooo happy you decided to do a sequel! Please let me read the full chapter 1 soon! |
Treasure Family chapter 16 . 10/22/2011 I love it. Great job. Please continue and write the sequel.(-) I wonder what will happen next. Where's Tsuna and what will happen next? I can't wait. I'll be waiting.(0) |