Great story! Thanks!

Wow! I loved this! Baby Charlie and little Don. Adorable!

Love this fic, like any typical teen Don got frustrated with his little brother and like any little brother Charlie wants to be accepted and included in his most likely her big brother's life - a tragedy occured but it showed Don the value of his brother and Charlie that Don does care for him even if he yells at him at times.

Nice little story, except I'm not too sure that Alan and Margaret would have owned a gun.

I could be wrong, but I thought at least, Alan, was anti-gun.

This story gives me mixed emotions, because when I was three years old I came within a hair of being fatally shot when my older brother and his friend were playing with a real gun. I will never forget that gun going off right beside me (even though I was very young). I will also never forget the look of terror on my brother's face. But the people who really need forgiven are Alan and Margaret, for leaving a loaded gun where their sons could get to it. But a very good, emotional story.

Nice!