aww this was sweet :) loved it x really miss Sahira n Jac together Xxx

Very realistic and believable..you write very well :)

Why can't this happen in holby?

not bad fo a fist story thouh it could do with a bit of reveisng/shortening in jac detail. very clever [plot line though. perhaps you coud write somthing similar on the sahira/hanssen front i love the dynamic and mystria them

keep writing !

That was excellent, you have got the dynamic of Jac and Sahira spot. It was funny too, I loved Sahira's 'Jilly Cooper comment. Also Jac eating carrot sticks was totally in character. A brilliant one shot.

Well done!

Firstly, thanks for your lovely reviews on my pieces- I'm glad you've finally written something so I can return the favour.

This story is adorable- I loved the idea, it was really original. Perhaps Greg was a little O/C but it doesn't really matter as you pulled it off very well. I wish this would happen in real life, I much prefer Jac when she's being nice!

I can't wait to read more from you!

Kat xx

I loved it.

This is brilliant for a first story. I thought the way you wrote the interaction between Jac and Sahira was very good, and Greg made me laugh at the beginning. Maybe a little out of character, but it didn't detract from the enjoyment of reading it. I really liked it, well done.