Wow. Your a writer and u can't even finish a book that's just weird. I was really liking it so far. But noooooo u had to just decide that u were to lazy to write. Sorry that just really upsets me! I hate when awesome writers like u were decide to stop writing an amazing book!

You know what I think that I assume you wanted to put this fic into hiatus cause u stop on ur tracks, like u lose ur imagination to it and lose ur interest towards it. I just assuming that's all.

Otherwise the story is good and just like u said it has a very hard plot. In that case u need too think thoroughly about it. See ur fic briefly, watch the plot where should be start and end, make side notes on the events, of the characters' actions and reactions.

Please let that's dream or whatsoever Natsu was having now in his mind to finish, cause I think it's a little bit long u know, unless u have already a strong plot and reasons behind it so if that the case then keep it like that.

Oh like what I mentioned before check ur fic cause it has some grammatical issues as for the rest ur story is good.

Mmmmmm I think that I write everything in my mind so far soooooooo... It's ur choice to complete it or not.

U need to reread ur fic, there're plenty of grammatical mistakes

Wait is this a past or present, why the people who are in the present are the same in the past?

Cool the past of the two

Was so suprised to see this note, but glad too. Honestly, what you might want to change is mostly the grammar. For the rest, well... it was pretty good. It might be good for you to know where you want to go with this fic (it always helps when writing to have a goal). Other than that... The characters are not OOC and the story seems interesting. I am sooooo excited about the new chapter! Scared too, because there is a lot at stake.
Hope to have helped, if only a little,
lunaticShipper.

I would just like to say that HOW CAN YOU NOT BE THAT INTO FAIRY TAIL IT'S NUTS ABSOULTLY CRAZY!

P.S. No offense

Ok so what I thought was that YOU could CONTINUE the ORIGINAL TIMELINE.

Don't care just update cause I love story so far

Please continue!

NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

I really love the story,I hope you're going to continue it but take it easy I don't mind waiting,and can I ask you why the sudden hiatus?

update! please I'm begging you

Your Story is great ! Please write more ! D

Wow! I like it very much! You should stop with the dream by the way. But like it!