Reviews for Mysterious Youth Secret
NonlinearWriter chapter 1 . 7/15
This is such a great 1 shot. One of the earliest dbz ff I've read which got me down this rabbit hole. Wanted to post this so hopefully it will will get more of the views it deserves!
kmsaum chapter 1 . 9/18/2019
So I freaking loved this? Thank you for writing it!
Amazing girl 55 chapter 1 . 11/2/2017
I have read this one shot a hundred times and it gets better every time. Funny thing is, I was actually going through your profile because of your latest story, and when I found this, I got so excited like you wouldn't believe. This is literally one of my favorite ideas ever and the way you pulled it off is amazing.
Riddle Wraith chapter 1 . 2/11/2017
You know, I could totally live with this AU as long as Trunks is still conceived. Honestly, I like it better than what happened in canon.
Pao Redwolf chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
I love it!
Astral Dragon Spirit chapter 1 . 2/22/2016
I enjoyed all 3 of your M. Trunks one shots (Mysterious Youth Unmasked & Secret and Hot Mom). I'd love additional chapters to these stories if inspiration ever struck you.
KillerAccountKiller chapter 1 . 10/6/2015
This is a fascinating what-if AU. Daddy! Vegeta was very emotional.
serenityselena chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
interesting story :)
Niki Spade chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Please add another?!
Galaxylam84 chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
Love it, i wouldn't doubt Vegeta could find out.
StillWatersAreDeep chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
I like this little one-shot. :) Thank you for writing it.
Lexie chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
That was a really good one shot and I can definitley imagine this happening in an episode, but there's one thing that I'm surprised no one pointed out. This sentence:

Krillin, Yamcha, Tien, Bulma, Gohan, and Krillin all gasped in amazement.

Anyone notice there are two Krillins? LOL.
Lexie
Libre Comme La Brise chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Too lazy to log in, but the name I used is my real pen name. AW! I really wish that you would continue this. It could be so cute and interesting. You could do a total B/V spin off. Think about how different things would be if Vegeta and Bulma were aware of Trunks? You would have an extremely fun and unique story! I'd read it! I imagine that Bulma would dump Yamcha almost immediately- which would obviously create tension. Then Vegeta and Bulma would probably have that one night stand they both seem to be considering towards the end of your story. But Vegeta and Bulma probably wouldn't fall in love or get together (permanently) the way they do in most B/V fanfics. It would be a very unique fic if you did write it.

Just a suggestion...

If you don't do it, would you mind me doing a spin off based off of this story? It isn't a for sure thing; meaning, I'm not definitely going to do it. It's just an idea. I completely understand if the answer is no. Even if it is a no, I would LOVE it if you wrote took the idea and ran with it.

Okay...My overactive brain and I are leaving now...

Sincerely,

Breeze
Reaper-KayReaper chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
OMFG YOU GOT TO MAKE MORE OF THESE TWO ITS FREAKING AWESOME...XD
jgkitarel chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
You know, if anyone would have figured it out, Vegeta or Bulma were at the top of my list. Vegeta is not stupid, despite his arrogance and pride often getting in the way. Bulma? If she took the time to think on it, I don't doubt she would have figured it out pretty quickly herself, though she tends not to think on things unless they're about to bite her.
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