Your grammar severely sucks

please update this story soon or this will be the last review you will ever get AND I MEAN VERY LAST YOU GOT IT?

Great job please continue

Alright, so I've read all 18 chapters and I really wanna read more! If you've done more chapters I'd really like to find the site it's on to continue reading!

continua esta historia son pocos los naru/hina/fuu y sobre todo que sean interesantres y bien desarrolaados buena no la dejes abandonada

that was good keep the chapters coming

love the story just wish it had more to it

I really regret allowing this to ever be adopted. It wasn't a well conceived idea and I'm not happy with how it was handled. Not at all.

damnit. this story sounds interesting and you don't finish the story.

Dead?

Okay plot, punctuation needed. Characters too puppet-like, lifeless, with no personality.

that was good keep the chapters coming

need lemons and let hinata and fu find out about what a pervert the pervy sage is first hand. get the feudal lord to find out that konoha has put a bounty out on naruto and have a meeting with councils and the feudal lord. does naruto love hinata or is it a friendship? how serious is naruto and fu? is it love? are they dating? will it get more intimate? do you have an update schedule prepared?

good story. spelling mistakes really make it hard to read. I always thought ninjas used chakra not charka.

like the story but have you abandon it or move to another site?