Yus. I like that. I'll be going there.

~Snappy~

Hello good, I hope your novels have been published successfully and you can live from writing. This story is really amazing and I can't help but notice that it's about to end, besides that the story that you are doing as rewriting has only 3 chapters, it saddens me greatly, I very much wished that the swarm control was, simply and completely in the hands of Night, surpassing their ancestors, getting the pride of their swarm, it really sounds great, also your point of view of the Zerg amazes me, in the game I identify with Zerg, They are creatures in constant evolution, I find it so incredible in itself. Your story is great and although it has been a long time and I do not know your current situation, Selfishly I beg you to continue this story. (Your writing is amazing, really engaging. (by the way, I'm using Google translator, I haven't reached a decent level of English yet)

This was a really good read... it's too bad the author dropped it. I could have done without the boy's family though, i mean i suppose they grounded him just like the story says... but i think less time spent fretting over his mother and sister would have been nice. Still... like i said... it was a good read and i enjoyed it while it lasted. I really wanted to see that enemy he was supposed to fight though.

This GUY is pathetic

Good story

zerg swarm is inherently OP!

Personally, I would love it if you made another one, the zerg swarm new...well it's not great... nor the Terran legion, they both lack the story this one has, please review this one, and make the Terran and protoss stories cause I loved this one, a story like that my imagination tries to go on when I find a new game to like, just better.

Loved it, my imagination goes to all these story types when I find a new game, please continue,this has a lot of potential for a series.

Ah too bad really, well it was a good ride and at least you gave a summary before dropping.

Thankfully no NTR. Its rude to take away mcs girl.

Too many emotions arent really a good thing. There is a reason for that. Without the emotional dampening of the zerg mc would have gone insane by PTSD and other mental problems.

Mc is too much of a pussy. Letting himself get hit by trash just because of guilt.

Well... i guess its a good thing mc didnt slaughter them all... haha. I would have killed them all long before they got a chance to even step on creep.

Showing his cards, even to enter a city is very very stupid. He should just make his own city and gather loyal people who have been kicked out by others.

This story is too tame