wow thank you

Amazing story. At one point I didn't like where it was going with Sylar's killing spree not changing, but this really couldn't have ended much better. 3

I really loved this. I actually found the second one and then this one lol but wow really good

Well i like it so far on it's own as a stand alone story, although I guess kinda it depends on how the squeal turns out

This just...wow. you kept every ones personalities right and it makes sense with show it wasn't boringly drawn out like stories can become. I dreamed about it.

Ahhhhckkk why did it end? Nooooooo morrrrre please. Sylar is my favorite character because he is dark and twisted but also do complex he wasn't born he was made. And that is what is so fanainating and you my dear have capture that essence the way no one has before in my experience so bravo/brava!

This was an amazing story! I love the way that you incorporated the actual storyline of the show into your story. Fantastic!

I thought this was going to be great… like a fix-it…sadly, I was wrong.. you still write good, tho.

Funny how there was no "saving" involved here after all...

This was brilliant! You're an amazing writer and storyteller.

Brilliant story - reading it a second time :) the sequel is also amazing.

I am thoroughly enjoying this story! This chapter was really cute and everything is well written. I am not a big fan of these two together normally, but the way you set it up and have carried it out so far is fantastic. Being a fan who is normally against this pairing, I commend you! It is actually believable and intriguing. They are both written so perfectly in character with their dialogue, reactions, expressions, etc. I just started reading this today and plan on finishing tonight or tomorrow as I seem to not be able to stop reading. I just wanted to review in case it took a little longer to get the end as I have sparse internet access.

o.O sooooo awesome! I really loved this story! *goes to read sequel*

This was so well done! Thank you for taking the time to write this wonderful story for us!

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