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I loved reading the lemon. I mostly read from the beginning of the lemon till the end of the story. I don't know why.

Wow! Have you done any more Mobiumshipping?! That was fucking hot! Aah, I especially loved the little bits of Monarchshipping... I have a weakness for that pairing, and I freaking love Monarchshipping smut. Some parts seem chaotic, but hey, it reflects the situation, so I guess that can be seen as a good thing. I really, really loved this!

ADORABVALVABLE DANGYMAGINY!...nyet, this is not proper English. But take the 4 first letters- you'll get what I'm saying.

Watch hunter x hunter the old version and betrayal knows my name and read saihate no kimi e for a cutie

I loved reading this story and I thought at the end of utter I should favorite it but then thought about how it would look like on my fav page and realised that there has been more smutty things that I've liked before that have less storyline than this and thought it deserves a favorite.
So hey me paraphrase because what I said sounds horrible.
I love the story, well done. I haven't read many yugioh stories yet but I have read similar ones and this is in my high 10's in my favorite stories like this one (it's like second on my list) well done.
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Maggie

Holy Ra! That was hot! Wow! -wipes away drool-

Mobium threesome? Heaven! You did it well, I applaud you! Yes double penetration is totally possible, so why not make Yugi experience it hehe.

In Mobium, I feel Atem is the top seme, Yami is the subseme that goes both ways, and Yugi is the natural cute fu(beep)able uke, hehehehe... But they can swop around when they want.

You did well with everything and I already spied the squeal- YAY MORE PORN! I NEED ME SOME SMEXY YAOI! -purrs- loved this!

*is currently passed out in her chair with a puddle of blood under her*

Naruto: *stares at the bloody mess with disheveled clothes* ...Seriosusly?

Sasuke: *appears out of nowhere* Did I say you could leave the bed?

Naruto: O_o EH? *is dragged away screaming for help by a smirking Sasuke*

*wakes up suddenly*

I SMELL YAOI! *runs after the two, leaving Yugi, Atemu, and Yami to stare after her*

Yugi: ...We're in this crazy place that she calls her mind, right?

Yami & Atemu: *smiles pervishly at Yugi and nods*

Yugi: Er...Why are you staring at me like that? O_O

*Somehow, Naruto had escaped Sasuke's clutches and ia now Yugi, trying to to help the innocent, cute duelist in evading his Semes*

Naruto: RUN, YUGI! RUN!

Me: NU! CATCH THEM! AND GIVE TAPES OF THE SEX SCENES!

(I have to end it here because the review is WAY too long or something...)

HOLY FUCKING RA! that was HOT! Damn!

So at the end...they both had the cocks in Yugi? Ouch! Damn horny perverted pharaohs.

Heh I'm not too fond of Atem and Yami being seperate people, but I like how you gave a reasonable explaination as to why they were seperate in this story :P I have to say that I love how you made Yami an Uke/Seme, Atem Seme, and Yugi Uke, it fits so well! Most of the threesome stories have Yugi as the Uke and Atem and Yami as the Seme's its a nice change makes your story unique. I love how devious you made Atem :P Hard to believe that this is your first threesome story you did an amazing job! This is my favorite threesome story! Well off to read the second one! Keep up the good work!

I really like the story that you wrote I think that the way you introduced it was good but I didn't like the fact that u said that ryou and yugi got together like that would never happen. The whole lemon was really good I think it was believable and I could imagine that in my mind! Ugh really good lemon to read and it made the story go by fast which what makes a good story. I think your story is what I would write about and I loved the fact that you made it a threesome lol more exciting (:

I really like the story that you wrote I think that the way you introduced it was good but I didn't like the fact that u said that ryou and yugi got together like that would never happen. The whole lemon was really good I think it was believable and I could imagine that in my mind! Ugh really good lemon to read and it made the story go by fast which what makes a good story. I think your story is what I would write about and I loved the fact that you made it a threesome lol more exciting (:

i loved this story! i love this 3some. im going 2 go read the sequel now.

YAY! I love AtemuxYamixYugi! 3 Thank you for the awesome story! And the story you were talking about in the aouthers note was Truth or Dare right? I loved the part when Atemu fainted. xD I laughed so hard. Thank you again, love this. :3

XD AHAHAHAHAHA! I have never seen Yami so submissive in my life! XD Atem dominated that bedroom... Sexy... I loved it! XD If this is your first time writing a threesome... I'm shocked...

XD you should write another story about these two... TT longer than a oneshot because this made me smile way too much!

The ending was very very sweet! XD