Nice.

LOL, this was a fun, sweet storey and I enjoyed it. Thanks for writing it, my life is a little zany right now and the lightness of the storey was very appreciated.

Ahhhh...cute...sequel?)

:D - My face right now

"you really want to go on a date with me?"

"Actually, I want to marry you and have your children, but I thought we'd start with something simple."

I love that exchange. Their conversation was wonderful. He'll totally go out with her! Yay!

Everything about this is fabulous. I wish they had shown some sort of interaction (like this, marriage proposal conversation and all/anything about her date) between John and Elizabeth over this situation.

I'm failing to express how much this made me smile and how much I love it but oh well, just know I do!

I love this. I love when he tells her she has to organize the marriage proposal, the comment about some tech fainting from nervous tension, all of it.

This is brilliant! I always imagined something like this happened after Sunday. You brought it to life beautifully. I really love all your John/Elizabeth stories.

loved it-want more!

Words cannot describe how much I liked this story! This is definately one of the best Sparky stories I've read in a long time and it is an instant favourite. This is what I wanted to see happen on-screen after 'Sunday' and the way you write it just makes it so believable. The part where John states that Elizabeth went on a date and it was with someone else... *sigh* breaks my heart. But you tied it up beatifully and gave us a happy ending which, in my book, us sparkies deserve. Thank you, thank you, thank you for sharing this story! I am truly in awe.

I'd write you a long, great, extremely enthusiastic review about how much I LOVED this story... but I'm currently to busy trying to find a couple of brain cells that aren't being busy being a melted gooey puddle of pure happiness, so I guess that'll have to wait (for the second chapter *hinthint*).

That was lovely! Very poignant and just...perfect! Thank you!