Hi! So, I just finished this, and I loved the story! I had already read Snowhawk's story multiple times, and finished Shattered and read a few of the one shots. I really loved this story, and I agree with how things ended up, with couples and I think first love really wouldn't of worked, because it would have been a bit too childish, which is not what this story was about. Spiderstrike and Sootsky (Eeeee I love their names!) definitely matured and grew up, so it makes sense that their romances changed and developed too. I find it easier to sway on ships as the character grows soooo. (Eeeeeeee BlackxSpider SootxRook RobinxBlizzard FirexLeopard ReedxJagged SilverxForest FrostxDark RavenxEagle) I really like Rook so maybe that's why I'm so onboard with SootxRook! Anyways, I hope Bluepaw becomes Blue and settles in the city with a mate, and that Icekit becomes a medicine cat and Shimmerfrost stops rebelling against Starclan and is happy and Jaggedclaw and Reedrush have more babies and so do Spiderstrike and Blackfeather! I hope this isn't Silverstar and Forestheart's last litter and Rosedapple and Northstar have another litter and Swanpaw and Sage have kits and Silverstar serves for many more moons and Eaglestrike becomes Eaglestar and after him, Spiderstrike becomes leader! I do not think that Northstar would lead Peakclan. Maybe Brackenstorm has it in him? Anyways, I hope Rabbitleap has many more babies with her mate who's name I can't remember, but I know I adored. I hope Thistlethorn gets a mate one day, and becomes happier, and Petalcloud her mate (Stone or Storm something) have a litter, and while I don't see Leopardstep as a mother, I hope she becomes mates with Fireblaze. And Robinpaw (Her warrior name should be Robinwing, because I don't think it was mentioned, but if it was, sorry!) and Blizzardwhisker became the next Dustpelt and Ferncloud in having kits, definitely. This story was amazing, and I loved how all the characters were developed, and how you even got me to love cats like Swanpaw and Fireblaze and Redpaw (Maybe Redfang, I imagine he became prickly but very loyal to Ashclan?) and Northstar (Tho I loved him in Shattered) and background or secondary cats like Rainwind and Brackenstorm and Tubs! Everyone grew up and became a better cat! I'm so proud (wipes tear)! Lol, this story was so engaging and you had me rooting so hard for Shrew and the other dark forest cats! I hope Minnow teaches Sootsky to love Great Mother, as nothing was her fault and I love her to pieces! In summary, I loved this fanfic, and I totally count it as cannon, along with Snatched! Bye!

This was amazing! In a way, Rook kinda reminds me of Hagrid, so I like him. Anyway, this series is very cool, and I ship Blackpaw and Spiderpaw. Swanpaw seems to like Sage, too!

I don't review most of the time because I have no point. I am loving this so far and I don't know what else to say XD I feel like I should be saying so much more. like critics or something but I find no faults in your writing. well, good job and since this story is already done and I'm just late, uh, keep up the good for futer projects.
this is why I don't review XD

You should do a One-Shot about the end of Icekit's life, and he remembers that he used to be chilled.
(My phone just did the perfect autocorrect. It changed Chillpaw to chilled. My phone apparently likes poetic endings.)

Sootkit has magical dreams that Chillpaw likes to send to her to give her nightmares. Sootkit thinks that if she repeats a ritual every morning, she will change appearances. Spotlit and her brother, Spider kit, try to explore, but Sootkit ends up falling in a river and Leopard, (who becomes Leopardpaw) saves her. Spiderkit has to take care of Jaggedclaw. Spiderkit and Sootkit become apprentices. Then Bluepaw liar-face sends 4 cats each from AshClan and PeakClan on a journey to get a remedy she actually already knows for a disease called the chilling disease (Or as my phone likes to call it, cheerleading disease). Sootkit sneaks along. Northstar drags her to the other cats that are on the journey. They all go to the mountains, wall Spiderpaw is being grumpy, and annoying everyone in a 20 mile radius. Chillpaw appears to Sootpaw. The journey cats reach the mountains, and one of the cats, Jaypaw, becomes sick and Sootpaw takes his place. Spiderpaw trains an apprentice who is fairly older than him, so that she wins her assessment, so that her annoying brother will get off of Spiderpaw's back. The journey and cats pass the mountains and gained a new member of there Patrol. Then they pass a hill and get two more members. They kill a cat. Nothing major happens for a while, except for Sootpaw learning Chillpaw's companions stories. Sootpaw's parents are not her parents and her brother is not her brother. Suddenly Bluepaw is a traitor and Chillpaw vanishes into Narnia and Leopardpaw is a traitor. Spiderpaw goes to the to twoleg place and gets captured.
This is a VERY ACCURATE representation of what has happened so far.

Maybe her paws are like a prophecy. The light one means that she's the light that will save Dark Forest cats, which are represented by the dark paw.
( for some reason the microphone cannot understand the word "paw". I had to say it like 7 times to get it to work.)

If you know of aphmau's mystreet, you will know Kawaii Chan and Robinpaw would get along perfectly. They both ship all the ships.

Are the "odd herb jokes" puns?

If you have a Pool of Eternal Night, then you can't have lights in it. It is the law of the Pool of Eternal Night.

Dovewing and Jag have the most rare of the all eyes. Magical color changing eyes!

Oh my god I love you this AN just sold it. Forget the plot. Everyone needs baby kittens (also my cat had kittens and they are just starting to run around the room and I love to imagine what they think when they play with each other or look at me with those Wide beady eyes) also I love the why you hint at things until someone points it out like it’s obvious

So, here I am: "WOW, look at me I finished shattered! I'm so proud of myself that long ass fic took me a couple months to read! I can't wait to read chilled! * clicks CHILLED* wow, I bet this has about 15 chappys. Than I can move on to tigerstars redemption. *Scrolls down*, *falls off chair in surprise* HOLY FUK. MORE THAN 70 CHAPTERS! *groans* I don't think I can do this... D:

Not gonna lie, I really don't like Rook/Soot. Partially because I'm diehard for Chill/Soot, and partially because I just don't like Rook himself. Would much rather Chill/Icekit remembered everything and eventually got back together with Soot.

But if I ignore that, this was an excellent follow-up. Both Spiderpaw and Sootpaw (or I guess Spiderstrike and Sootsky!)'s journeys were very compelling; I was never bored with one, and always eager to see the other PoV. I think the plot was a little weaker compared to the prequel-for one it seemed kinda slow, for another I figured out most of the twists ahead of time, save the Bluepaw one (which really took me by surprise, but pleasantly), but I still enjoyed it. The characters more than made up for it, besides; I didn't like them at first, but Spiderstrike and Leopardstep became some of my favorite characters because of their development, and Chillpaw especially. What can I say, I dig icy, logical, 'I feel nothing' characters discovering emotions, especially when paired with the redemption arc he got (...which I'm also a fan of). Seriously, you took a(nother) murderer and turned him into an interesting, likeable and tragic character, without excusing or forgetting his actions.

(Did I mention 'Deader Than Dead' makes me really sad in my review for Shattered? I think I did. So obviously I'd prefer to headcanon otherwise for him, haha. ...though Blight fully deserves what he got.)

So since ffn doesn't seem to like when I post these reviews I'll put it in simpler terms
Hello everyone! I don't know if anyone reads the reviews or not, but I have made a wiki for all of Prin's fanfictions! Search up Warriors Shattered Wiki on google and it'll come up! I need lots of help if any of you would be so kind as to help me with character articles and such! Thank you :D

Attention everyone!

If any of you read the reviews (lol) from this long ago fanfic, I bring you good news! I have made a wiki for Prin Pardus' work! Search up .com and you'll see it! I need lots of help writing articles for the characters, and filling in information on the Clans :) I hope to see everyone there!