Hi! I saw a review of yours on a GaaSaku fic so I decided to check out your profile, and I found myself with a GaaSaku author. So then I checked what stories you wrote and decided to start with this one.

It was great! Well, is actually. I loved the way you described his feelings, his need for life in a new way, how the new Gaara thinks and feels after Naruto. It's a pretty good one shot and thanks to this one, I'll check out your other stories as soon as possible.

Grammar, hmm, I'm not quite sure if I can make a grammar observation since my english grammar isn't very good (my mother language is spanish) but you left me doubting, you wrote Yoshimaru... Isn't it Yashamaru? I got confused LOL.

Anyways, I hope you don't mind; and I hope you get to read this some day, you'll be hearing from me very soon, I really want to check out your other stories :)

Have a wonderful week!

JeanyDeiXzz

My oh my ,this was refreshing to what I've been reading is one of my fav characters and I luv the story

This was breathtakingly impressing. The imagery was poignant and clear. The feelings poured into this fanfiction are amazing, soulful and intriging. You are very good at writing and I enjoyed this tremendously. Very well done. :)

Cool!

I feel how you described Gaara's thoughts were incredible. I took a breath and couldn't release it until I finished this. Tears fell as I saw this in my mind, as I yearned to reach out and hug poor Gaara. Well done.