I just started reading this two days ago and here I am at the end already lol. I sacrificed quite a bit of sleep, but I don't regret a thing. With the way the perspective shifts from one person to the next, and how everything is connected, I quickly got into it. It's all so in-depth, and pretty well explained too. I could easily picture it as an anime, one that I'd definitely watch. I don't know how long it's been since the last chapter, but I did see a review/comment saying it's been awhile. I know the times are currently pretty rough, but I hope to someday see your story through to the end. It's been an amazing experience.

Please update!

Umm... AnarchySong, after you update Chapter 25: Ounce Upon a Time in Lucienta Part 2, can you write about how Gumi and Miku met when they were still young? Well I'm just wondering, and... can you make a scene where Gumi tried to save Miku? And Gumi almost dying in the process? If you don't mind... Well... That's all I want to request... If it's okay for you... And if you don't want to... That's alright for me. And keep updating, AnarchySong!

Author san please don't stop updating

Author San you're back. Thank you so much for coming back. I missed you so much

Hello there. I wanted to say it's a really good story, but you probably heard that a lot. I'm going to say more then.
It is really well written, with distinctive style, but still not perfect. You may want to do some proofreading in newer chapters.
Also while I understand, and sometimes enjoy having multiple pov's in here, in my opinion it just as often makes the story less immersive, little harder to follow and making the border between main characters (which at the moment I believe are Miku, Gumi, Teto and Uta) and secondary ones a little dim.
Last thing I want to address is a character development. There are only two characters in this category that are decent in my opinion. And it is Gumi and, although we don't see much of her, Haku. Gumi is struggling to change herself, starting from getting more confident, although it's going kinda slow. (And while I'm talking about her, why isn't she thinking about what happened in that room, when her consciousness got sucked out of her body for a moment. Normally that would be one of the first things to think about when action slowed down.) Second is Haku, which seems to change from someone being similar to current Miku to someone who can slow down and thin think hard enough to lead everything without joining the action herself. That looks like a big change to me.
Of course, it doesn't make it a bad story. It is pretty good and though of, a little stiff (whole explanation above), but still interesting. Not the best story of all I have read here on this site, but still in between the top ones.
Ok then, that's all for now.
Till the next time!

PS: If there is any part in my review that got to you, I'm sorry, that wasn't my intention. My reviews are simply my thoughts and although they may be harsh, their are written with good intentions. I wish you a wonderful day. See ya! :-)

Omg I can't believe my eyes it's actually updated. Thank you. You are the best writer. I miss you

Pls continue! Can you update on holidays, AnarchySong? Because I know that you will have plenty of time to continue your story, you give me a really good time reading this for a million times and it gets even better whenever I read this magical art of yours. God Bless and Good on everything, AnarchySong!
( -)/ :GO ANARCHYSONG!

I'M SCREAMING IVE BEEN RE-READING THIS FANFIC AGAIN RECENTLY SINCE IT IS THE BEST FANFIC IVE EVER READ AND NOW YOU UPDATE? HOLY HELL THIS IS A GIFT

Hi! The name's Rucel Ann M. Macariola and a pure Filipiniana here in Philippines. I idolize your writing and your a great (or best) author that I've found here on FanFiction. I plan to make an account here on FanFiction to make great stories like yours. The day I found your story (which was last year ago), which is Vocal Vision, I got interested on reading it, as the story progress, the more I got inspired and motivated to make/write a story. Thank you for updating this story and yeah it really is been awhile since you updated. And I only have one question in here... or two... or maybe three?: Are you planning Gumi to meet Haku? Well I mean, Kaito is one of Haku's employee or something like that and Kaito met Gumi in his Military Base or whatever that place is called. And why do you call Gumi as the 'Smart Cookie'? And her portrayed as a smart/intelligent person. The question is why you portrayed her like that And when will Miku and Gumi meet again? I hope you can read this, AnarchySong.

From:Rucel

Darn right it's been a while.

I guess miracles do happen sometimes and fics get updated years after the last chapter, just when you think all of your favorite fics are dead and the reader forever left hanging.
Glad to see you back. :)

Been a while indeed.

! You’re back! I saw the update notification and didn’t hesitate to read! I love the character work you’ve done with Haku and Luka here and I can’t wait to see more from you in the future!

Glad to see you back on the ball, man. Plus, I love the backstory you wrotr in this chapter.

I remembered this fic the other day, and then promptly went to search it out and reread it. It’s been a few years, but I still remember that I loved the way you wrote your characters! This story holds a place as one my favorites . There’s a rather slim chance that you’ll read this, but if you do, I wish you luck in all your future writing!