Woah this was great! Very interesting and different concept. I've never read a story like this! Thanks for writing (:

"Could he accept the possibility that Brian Lee and Matthew Villanueva might love each other as much as Axel and Roxas did?"

I don't know why that line hit me so hard in the chest *.*

I've never read anything like this before. It was a little bizarre, but interesting.

Ahhh this was really beautiful sdkfs and I just don't know what else to say-my mind kinda blanked out after I finished-and wow, just wow...thank you for making this lovely fic ; v ;

This is such an insanely original take on the "next life" theme between Axel and Roxas, it's so...like a story I never knew I needed until I read it. You have such a gorgeous way of wording everything and keeping the reader guessing until the end, and the fact that you never have to outright say "Hey look everybody, this is them in the next life!" but can still easily get that idea across is brilliant. I'm in love with the idea of only them being able to see the other's past appearance.

This story is entirely self-encompassing and doesn't need to be added onto or changed at all, but I would love to explore the concept you have going here further. It's put so many ideas in my head for new stories, haha!

i cant read anything you write without crying fucking christ

This really surprised me (really, /really/ different from the other next lfie fics out there) but it was a nice kind of surprise. It made me cry... Just wanting to say that I loved reading this... Any hopes for a sequel? :)

Please excuse my inelegency as I state that I fucking love this. It's a comoletely different take on past lives and the interpretation. Adding the racial confusion made such a nice twist. It was beautiful, a bit vague, and all the better for it. Why does anyone else need to understand our love?

I think you just mindfucked me brah. Like really hard.

Wow. This was such an interesting take on the "next life" plotline. Absolutely amazing, though by now I expect nothing less from you.

Holy crap I f*% ing adore this! Best afterlife fic I've found by far! I loved how you inserted the name of Hayner or Demyx just once so we could get that's who they were. Awesome :). Thanks for writing this.

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I can honestly say that I have never, ever read another story like this on this site, and that is what makes an already awesome story absolutely amazing.

Oh god. I don't know if I should, but this is so beautiful I'm tearing up. This was so bittersweet and sad, but I love it. It's absolutely wonderful. Your descriptions were flawless and flowed effortlessly, especially when describing Brian Lee/Axel. Thank you so much for this beautiful piece.

This was really great. I'm so impressed with your use of a word's definition for your inspiration and structure of a story.

I loved reading this and I'm so glad that you wrote it.

This story is amazing. I had to read it twice to understand what was going o. In the begining (mostly because I kept getting interrupted) but once I did I was amazed.

One of my favorite parts I. When Jose/hayner calls Roxas, Matt. I absolutely adore your stories and can't wait to read more.

Hmmmmmm interesting, really interesting. Espically since roxas and axel are themselves, and yet not.