Reviews for Clash of missions |
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TaniyaW1112 chapter 4 . 5/3/2019 PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! THIS IS REALLY GOOD! PLEASE COME BACK AND FINISH IT! |
Zeta chapter 4 . 1/17/2018 I know it has been years since you updated, but I just want you to know that this story is still good. I really like it, so thanks for writing it. |
Miley chapter 4 . 10/1/2017 I don't know why but I can't bring myself to like the Naruto of this story. He just seem to go for the carnal pleasure and not caring for Hinata if she consents to it or not. Yes, they had to act but he could have been mild if he did really cared. And the anal just makes me hate him more, cuz for my part, that could have been avoided. But him being in control of keeping his virginity intact even when living under such a heellhole was so cute and so gentlemanly of him. I really love that aspect of his. Though in my opinion, the story would have been better if Naruto had to train Hinata not because he was being pressurised but because he made the choice to train her instead of handing her off to some lecherous leech. But still, that's my fantasy and it's already a beautiful and smexy story in itself so you should definitely and absolutely continue this. Hope you get lots of ideas and come out of your super duper writer's block. FUN FACT: I skipped the entire SasuSaku ordeal. |
TaniyaW1112 chapter 4 . 6/28/2017 please udpate this is really good |
my 2 guys chapter 4 . 1/19/2017 that was good keep the chapters coming |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2016 Update please |
Guest chapter 4 . 8/24/2016 Are you going to do a new chapter |
Nana-chan chapter 1 . 7/16/2016 Hello i have little question...will you someday update this story or my hope is lost ? :'((( |
Kamadre2hot chapter 4 . 8/27/2015 When's the next chapter Senpai? |
Twinkies4lifes chapter 4 . 7/12/2015 Why did you stop this samazing story along with chronicles of the west? Are you dead or not? |
Hatake Kaisa chapter 4 . 5/16/2015 Amazing! Cant wait |
AAAllisWell chapter 4 . 5/15/2015 Please continue this! It's just amazing, i dunno why, but i love stories with dom!naruto x sub!hinata ahahahha Update soon pleaseee |
Ms.camilahigareda chapter 4 . 4/24/2015 Plz finish ,good story |
Guest chapter 4 . 2/24/2015 You are a pretty good writer. And this story has a good plot too. Maybe you can hinata be in charge for the surprise. I can't wait for another chapter! |
Arasia chapter 4 . 9/18/2014 Writing good smut isn't easy, but I really enjoyed reading yours. I understand your frustration with your writer's block, I get that a lot too and it's a horrible feeling :( I hope you got past yours already! I'm still trying to overcome mine haha. Can't wait to see how your plot develops, and enjoy the lemons in the meantime. |