Reviews for A Candid Start
LouiseUchiha chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
Good job...and I can understand Sasuke..it is so difficult when your friends talk and talk about something and leave you behind.
Zeny chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
Oh, I liked it a lot x3 Ill read more of your works, Im very curious!
See ya!
SD3322 chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
That was a good story. Good job._
spazmoid chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
I quite enjoyed this. It was poetic in a sense. I wish I could say more, but I don't watch enough Naruto to understand the complexity of the characters. [I do quite enjoy reading well-written fanfiction however. Shhh... It's my inner, not-so-discreet secret. c;]
666snoopy chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Very cute, great job!
NaruSasuNaruLover chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
That was just really cute - especially the ending ...perhaps a tad predictable but that's okay there's nothing wrong with that...though after the little tidbit on Sasuke being inexperienced I would have liked to have seen Naruto ruin the moment at the end with making a joke or something about it
Amethyst Skulkyrie Cain chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
Wow. This is very well written, and mainly in character. The argument between Naruto and Sasuke was VERY well written, because I could almost see it playing before me. You... I dunno... but you've got talent for writing!

Going on favs list!

:)
3dumplings3 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
This is very well written;; it's absolutely lovely...

The problem is: I don't really see Naruto and Sasuke in here.

I feel like, if you change the names, they would be more themselves, be their own characters.

I think it would be better as an original piece )
ide00 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
too cute! i loved it...
je.me.souviendrai.tjs chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Lol Now Sasuke knows what to do in order to have Naruto's attention: a wild night :D

I really enjoy reading this story, 'cause we got the chance to see jealous Sasuke
HereIam-Vagabond chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
That was really adorable and I really adored it. :) You're a great writer! Sasuke & Naruto were so realistic in this. Stubborn they are!
xen665 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
naaaw! that was cute . ho i dont see why its M. T would make more sense.