Reviews for A Candid Start |
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LouiseUchiha chapter 1 . 11/13/2014 Good job...and I can understand Sasuke..it is so difficult when your friends talk and talk about something and leave you behind. |
Zeny chapter 1 . 8/13/2014 Oh, I liked it a lot x3 Ill read more of your works, Im very curious! See ya! |
SD3322 chapter 1 . 11/3/2013 That was a good story. Good job._ |
spazmoid chapter 1 . 7/7/2011 I quite enjoyed this. It was poetic in a sense. I wish I could say more, but I don't watch enough Naruto to understand the complexity of the characters. [I do quite enjoy reading well-written fanfiction however. Shhh... It's my inner, not-so-discreet secret. c;] |
666snoopy chapter 1 . 6/1/2011 Very cute, great job! |
NaruSasuNaruLover chapter 1 . 5/24/2011 That was just really cute - especially the ending ...perhaps a tad predictable but that's okay there's nothing wrong with that...though after the little tidbit on Sasuke being inexperienced I would have liked to have seen Naruto ruin the moment at the end with making a joke or something about it |
Amethyst Skulkyrie Cain chapter 1 . 5/22/2011 Wow. This is very well written, and mainly in character. The argument between Naruto and Sasuke was VERY well written, because I could almost see it playing before me. You... I dunno... but you've got talent for writing! Going on favs list! :) |
3dumplings3 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011 This is very well written;; it's absolutely lovely... The problem is: I don't really see Naruto and Sasuke in here. I feel like, if you change the names, they would be more themselves, be their own characters. I think it would be better as an original piece ) |
ide00 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011 too cute! i loved it... |
je.me.souviendrai.tjs chapter 1 . 5/21/2011 Lol Now Sasuke knows what to do in order to have Naruto's attention: a wild night :D I really enjoy reading this story, 'cause we got the chance to see jealous Sasuke |
HereIam-Vagabond chapter 1 . 5/21/2011 That was really adorable and I really adored it. :) You're a great writer! Sasuke & Naruto were so realistic in this. Stubborn they are! |
xen665 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011 naaaw! that was cute . ho i dont see why its M. T would make more sense. |