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So...is Naruto a 12 year old? Cause that's gross, make him older man.

Ya you lost all my interest adding Orochimaru so dumb

Seriously, don’t want critique, don’t publish.

continualo esta increible y mas con orochimaru, opino que tuvo que ver con la marca maldita expuesta al poder del kyubi

So is Naruto ever going to fight or will he just keep tanking everything. Because the way I see it, becoming a new kyuubi seems to not give him any improvements. If he was buying time, the people he was doing it for are shit people

Type your review orochimaru can cross dimention wow his even stronger than the kyubi useless fic

Why must everyone in a Naruto/Sekirei crossover pair Naruto with Matsu, she's hot, and she's a single number, but she's not the only brain type Kocho's a brain type too, and I think it'd be Awesome if Mason Izumo had more than one Brain Type. Plus I really get the feeling that Kocho was forcibly winged by Kakizaki.

I got one for Akitsu. "Ice of my bond. Freeze the enemies of my Ashikabi, Diamond Dust!" A ball of Ice Cold energy appears between Akitsu's hands when the Norito is complete the ball is shoved forward and the energy is released as it travels freezing everything it passes by and if given one heck of a boost by Naruto can even act like Aokiji's Ice Age from One Piece.

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interesting

sweet

nice

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