Reviews for Not what they wanted, just Harry
Guest chapter 13 . 7/7
I really love this fic! Continue pleaseeee?
Clarissa chapter 5 . 6/27
I like nice Flint.
Foalan101 chapter 13 . 5/8
Only negative about this story is it's incomplete.
hi i guess chapter 13 . 10/13/2019
this was quite a charming story and its a shame it was abandoned so long ago, i was looking forward to snapes reaction when harry told him he was consorting with Salazar himself! i do love seeing salazar making an appearance in fics. i do rather think that harry would've benefited from having a pet snake; plus things would of course go much smoother if snape possessed the gall to tell harry outright that he wouldn't harm him. i also liked seeing this side to ron, it's clear that harrys as well as hermiones presence tamed him, although he certainly would not go this far if it were to occur canonically; but then again, as you mentioned this is au, not canon, for which im glad of. funnily enough in most slytherin!harry stories, you don't see him getting much backlash for his house, which i greatly appreciate for being displayed here...im also pleased that it took a while for snape to come to his wits, since in most fics with a story similar to this one he would jump from prejudice to being on first name terms to harry, which is unrealistic since prejudices do indeed die hard, especially since slytherins, and snape in particular, are ace at holding grudges! i also, ah, have a slightly sadistic streak at snape torturing harry whilst not realizing what he was going through, having been at the receiving end of such ignorance myself. if this had been continued i would've liked to see harry consort with the other slytherins, namely draco and blaise, and for draco to realize just how _wrong_ he had been! i do suppose that i'm getting ahead of myself since im used to reading so much drarry.
im terribly sorry for the essay; i guess not being at school has left me missing writing formally, even though i do doubt you'll see this considering its been more than half a decade. if you are reading this, cheers, your characterization of harry was wonderful and his tentative friendship with neville was equally so, despite the complaints of it being out of character; it was quite obvious of how skittish harry would be from the summary, so it's quite counter productive for others to complain as such. also, as you may have noticed, my grammar isn't the best and spellcheck is the only reason that i havent failed abysmally, and i find that your occasional misspelling was growing to be quite endearing, though i do perhaps feel that sounds condescending- it just gives the story of being more rough and less polished, as it should be considering what matters it breaches. oh! again, im terribly sorry for rambling, i just found this fic precious, though i don;t blame you for ths slightest at the inability to continue it~~
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 12 . 10/4/2019
Severus is fooling himself the Dursleys will kill him to along with Harry. Plus Harry needs to learn why the Dursleys call him a freak and that The Dursleys refer to All Witches and Wizards As Freaks.

Dumbledore needs to learn that the Dursleys will kill everyone from their community with the belief they have absolutely no rights and as a result, they are all to be killed.

The Parents need to be punished along with the offspring/children and the message made clear that teaching one's children prejudice and bigotry will no longer be tolerated. Refuse to change and give it up with the result in losing any and all rights to their kids and that they will no longer be allowed to have anymore and if they have one in the way that one will be taken upon birth. And the children will have their minds searched and all those hateful lessons will be wiped from the Children's minds and will be taught what they should have from the beginning. And if necessary even the Parents will be wiped and reeducated in an effort to try and save their population but if it looks like it won't work with some and show they are just too dangerous then they are to be put down locking them up is not good enough because they could escape. Or be broken out by like mine. Because is no room for stupid prejudices and bigotry. When it comes to hate the only thing I hate more than anything is wrongdoing which breaking the laws and commandments of our Creator who is also our Heavenly Father/Parent. Because sin, as used in the Bible, would be better known in modern terms as criminal behavior. That not only harms ourselves but for others. Which I find as just plain sheer stupidity.
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 6 . 10/4/2019
How f-ing stupid are every one that He is being abused at home and they the Wizarding are so damned stinking blind that Harry is abused physically, mentally, emotionally, verbally. His physical needs neglected no proper clothing to proper food this is why Harry is small and malnourished. Plus Harry is self-deprecating because of the Dursleys, As a result, the entire Wizarding world needs to be punished for not seeing the truth of things. I hope everyone is punished for their own brand of abuse and Neglect and their sheer stupidity. Harry doesn't seem to get that what is happening to him is wrong plus Everyone in Surry needed to be punished for not protecting Harry from the Dursleys and for believing all the blasted lies from the Dursleys. I want to see My Cousin Queen Elizabeth the Second punish everyone in the

All the fucking Slytherins need to lose their magic Along with all the Adults Who are Death Eaters.

I hope that Poppy gives a comprehensive Physical to show Harry's full medical history. Plus everyone who has called Harry a Brat is so wrong in the end Harry isn't the brat The Dursleys and all the citizenry of Surry are the Real Brats along with all of the Stinking Wizarding World for not recognizing Abuse and Neglect.

Plus Harry keeps calling himself a freak but what he doesn't seem to realize is that the Dursleys would also call all Wizards and Witches basically all magic users Freak and unnatural and should be put to death. All of the Wizarding needs to be punished and reeducated. Even if it means wiping their minds and using magic to reeducate everyone. All death eaters are to be executed all children are to be removed from their parents and they are never to be allowed to raise children ever again to put an end to all prejudice and bigotry. If fact all so-called purebloods are to be bread out of existence. This put an end to all this bullshit. And all individuals like the Dursleys should also be put in prison for life. And all obese pieces of shit be put on a diet until they are at the weight where they belong and never allowed to eat more than what is needed for proper health. As for the unreasonable prejudices coming from both sides needs to be put to an end, in fact, the House system needs to be put to an end it is partly responsible for this whole stinking mess. When it comes to Albus and the Weasleys I want to strip them naked and Spank them until every inch of their bodies is bruised black and blue. And Everyone who is like the Malfoys needs to be stripped of their wealth and titles and lands and forced to do God Honest Hard labor work because they don't know what true honest work is. Living off the labors of the generations before them if it was honest but as some Stories in fanfiction and hits in canon, The Malfoys used deceit and trickery to take the wealth and assets of the Weasleys leaving them in poverty. And manipulating the Ministry to keep the Weasleys in low paying jobs. Or manipulating their employment contracts so that they can never be paid what their labors for their jobs are really worth and doing the same for others at the ministry especially those they call half-bloods, muggle-born and blood traitors. When in reality they are the true traitors to all of humanity and the creator our Heavenly Father who gave us the true purpose and meaning for our lives. We as humans are to be stewards and caretakers of the Earth and all the plants and animals and other native races here on earth or were here on earth but are now extinct no thanks to humanity as a whole where each generation will be punished for the part of the environmental destruction they are responsible for. During the time period in which they lived.
Wenuhotep29 chapter 13 . 6/22/2019
Hey this was awesomeness is there another similar to it?
Chezakeeba chapter 13 . 1/20/2019
Love it!
peaches-and-tea chapter 3 . 12/16/2018
I’m sure he isn’t that stupid to know Potter is being abused
Ilena Petrova chapter 13 . 10/22/2018
Sad that you never finished this awesome story.
Guest chapter 7 . 9/26/2018
Just one issue.
Harry calls himself a freak a lot, and a unnatural one at that. I don't understand why he doesn't realize that the only reason he was ever called that by the Dursleys was because he has magic.
You'd assume that at some point it would click?
Idk i just find i5 too repetitive.
FlowerChild23 chapter 13 . 8/30/2018
Please update last update was 2013
Gueys chapter 1 . 7/18/2018
There's a lack of characterization and reaction and your spellings seems to fluctuate a lot, for example; "Sum" instead of "Some" or "Relived" instead of "relieved". Other than that, its a good story, enjoying it.
pottersparky chapter 13 . 6/4/2018
Five years after your last chapter to this. It real shame to because this great story that wish to read more of. I can't understand how many people turn backs on Harry potter just because of house he was put in. Later on I think when to late to say that their sorry that Harry potter be on his way to another magic school where not have put up with all things that they have done. Hermione and Neville are heroes for standing up for what they know is right. They only ones who see that school are full of evil monsters who only think of themselves than others. Ron weasley is Draco Malfoy in lion house. Severus is a leader that trying fix mess up school and other teachers are seeing that he is right. I hope that give him a house elf to look after him in that house of evil people that he force to live with. I think Severus should talk with Neville grandmother let her know just how much Neville like his father. It just so amazing that can't help wish you find it in your heart to do more. I guess that after five years finding your way back is hard to do. Just know if you read this that your story has been treasure and hope my review made you happy.
Darklightningstorm chapter 13 . 2/26/2018
I'm quite enjoying this, so I hope you come back to it one day.
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