Very very good thank you

Still enjoying thank you

Still enjoying it

Very good first three chapters enjoyed it very much look forward to a lot more

This is very good so far, too bad it was not completed.

Amazing how all of Harry's opponents are skilled duelists.
Has Moody's training school of hell any remaining slots after so many bad ass wizards ?

I think it's Lily Elizabeth Potter née Evans and not the other way.

... we work for the greater good of the Empire ...
What ?
Ming is back ?
WTF, no one notified me !
oh, you talk about the British Empire... well, sad news he died and was buried some years ago.

Where is Harry's medal for killing the bitch headmistress? I can't read this.

Great story! Shame it has been so long since an update. Will you be continuing the story?

Very good story look forward to updates

Snort in my country (which also works on a prime minister and royal basis) you cant be legalmy punished if under 14... until then its the parents job and if they cant do it. Foster family ir orphanage.

Between 14 and 18 theres well it probably translates best to juvie, child jail.

Above 18 all bets are off and iirc max sentinence for (1) murder 17 years, although there is one for more problematic criminals

Voldemort 117 and fudge 120... doesnt the death eaters count? Or are they just minor crooks in comparison?

ron died in the duel. why has he been in the last few chapters?

Son, you apologized for your grammar a few times. Well, I'm not a native speaker myself so I know what a gruelling chore it is to produce a linguistically correct text. Unfortunately, grammar and spelling aren't the greatest flaws of your submission. The greatest problem is the story itself. Or the lack of it, to be precise.
Many authors fail to create a properly structured and logically consistent story. This often leads to their story breaking down to a series of out-of-context events which have no real cohesion. However, I would dare to say that your text is even one step further. It's not a series of event - it's a bunch of statements, half of them quite indignant. That's what you were aiming for, right? To outrage people and disturb their imagination.
I'll give you a good advice. Take it all as a learning experience, delete this story and start from the beginning. After all, the basic idea isn't so bad.

I did a search for a story where Harry Potter went to a military school. I was eager to find one where Harry could apply that knowledge to the wizarding war. I hope you can update soon. This story sounds similar to what I was looking for.