This is an amazing fanfic

I mentally edit, but sometimes, little things...it's like a tiny rock in your shoe. So, venting! Then finishing the story, which I think is fun. A little faceroll OP is nice sometimes.

I'm freakin' amazed at the speed with which Naruto "leveled up", but I'ma ascribe that to the liberal abuse of shadow clones. *DING!* Done!
I also hadda raise an eyebrow to find noob people from Konoha were immediately given trust and high positions. Nice that nobody from the West resents that, despite their service, loyalty and experience with their boy. Guess they're just chill that way.

You say "all but" a lot. So, a character was everything, BUT ...something. All. BUT. (except). Furious. So, since Danzo is ALL BUT furious, he ain't furious, although I expect he's kinda ticked off.

Is your "Honmura" related to Mitokado Homura?

I tried to find pictures of ...what was it, chegonams or something? I'll just envision a cheongsam; close enough. It's just a western translation of the Chinese term anyway, as is qipao, so it's all general really.
I didn't know that that style of dress came about in 1920's Shanghai! Learned something new today!

Whoo! Okay, all better!
On to Danzo-stomping! (If somebody doesn't like that, they probably hate Santa Claus and kittens too.)

Lol. Pointless point of order. Face someone. Reach across and touch their right shoulder. (You'll be using your LEFT hand, okay?) Cool.
Now. Have THEM touch your LEFT shoulder. Yeah. SAME SIDE.
I dunno how they hell they did THAT simultaneously. Well...Orochimaru could do it.
Ninjas are more flexible than am.

Beautiful

Robert Krause thoughts when Naruto be took out if i Robert Krause was doing it the 1 thing is Sarkura was to go with him and be his 2 comer and then co ruler ,when the 2 had took over her new looking is blue and black and red , when she had muslces on her like she-hulk , red and green and when then Naruto had muslces too, like the hulk green red and gray too, when then the 2 had 1 be workings a vaillge name dawn fire no go , a home when the tor had working as boundy huthers , when took out the thifrs kings and army s out , when one day Naruto is kage of dawn fire no go , as the 1 one and when took out war lord Sammy no go , ex sand ninja and be in lords of winds former chief of staff and be fire form the job , and he move west and made his army up form took money from the sand winds lands and when Naruto came here he get took out and as well a ex cop Chief of MP and ex cap Ash Leroy and his lover and 3 wife clover honey love marring Naruto now , when made the new lands now warlord and now Emperor now , when clover honey love get sand to a vaillge in the woods for when she had gave Naruto a son name garland Leroy , when his other one had 2 set twins Naruto JR and missy fire , when suskue had sell off his clans lands and money form it and clan money help out the boy move to lands of snow and wolfs he now living by himdife when doing a book on the life of lost his tame and he dead in time of age 53 years old , when Naruto JR had help out his step brother Ash Leroy out who was in the navy and warrior too ,

This is very easily one if not the best story's I have ever read, after every paragraph i was one the edge of my seat wondering what will happen next, and with the ending is also one of the best I've ever seen I can't really say how much I loved this story thank you so much for just doing what you enjoy doing.

The Empire’s motto reminds me of Palpatine’s speech in Star Wars

Jaime bien toute l'histoire et les eeuw fin sont génial.

J'adore tout simplement bien que j'aurais fait pire pour la tête de hanabi.
Première tentative échoue je passe à 250 M puis 500 puis faire une offre a tsunade.

I'm going to say this. I personally think that ending B was the better one. I like the idea of Naruto, Hinata and the Jinchuruki being almost immortal and watching over the world from the shadows.

This was definitely one of the best stories I've ever read. And I am a total sucker for any story with a dynasty to it. I cannot wait to read more of your works. :3

Sequel!
Descendant discovers bloodline
(An idea)

my lord Orochi was never a sage nor was Tsunade -

bruh this chapter was great till you called mei kazekage and gaara the two tails holder -

You should make a second one where they find out they are alive and thier kins use a special Ability call Souls where it mark thier family tree and who are alive and death you should give it to the girl