Ffff. -dies-

The AkuRoku in this. I think I paid more attention to it than the SoRiku.

Ilovethis.

This was SO cute! I can't believe I hadn't read this already, seeing as how you are amazing at writing Kingdom Hearts fanfiction! I really liked how it was an in-game type of fic; there never seem to be too many of them. And I also loved the addition of the AkuRoku moments ;) lol

I loved this story. It was just beautiful. Thank you!

I love this. Fairly intense, stupendously incredible, at times heart-wrenching. In a word: Perfect. I love how you write Riku/Sora.

dear god
this is why i shouldn't read fanfic at three in the morning
your writing gives me ALL THE FEELS
imma go to sleep now
but you're awesome.

Nice story. Good job.

T_T

How have I never read this? Oh my god. I fail as a Lauren fangirl. This was really good, and the epilogue was I have to to see what other stories of yours I've missed...

Absolutely Fabulous.

Usually I read AU stories (even slight AU but sort of canon) with a grain of salt because the characters can be butchered so easily. But I really liked the backstory and it made everything else make sense and just: Riku and Sora's interactions were brilliant. Of course Riku would engage in sort of self destructive habits to cope, and of course Sora would show up right on time to keep him from the one that would "put him over the edge".

My favorite parts were when then had it out at the beach and (FINALLY) kissed and Riku totally lost it, and then at the end when Sora was like, "I'm not going to leave you ever, so quit being a moron". Also, I think it's really accurate characterization the way Riku finally asks him to stay and it's like he can't believe it at first, like he thinks he's going to wake up and find out he's dreaming.

So just, the whole thing was really, really great.

Also, what is this about a secret epilogue that I saw on your page? Cause I'd love to see that, no lie.

Words cannot describe just how much I am in love with this. The fights were amazing...loved how Sora finally decided to take up Ven's fighting style and how naturally it seemed to come to him.

Everything just...made sense and other than getting that playlist (shot) I can't think of anything that would make this better

This story is beautiful. I really enjoy how most people would make this an AU story, but you managed to fit it in to the KH universe. Very well done.

This story was completely awesome, your writing style is great and the way you developed the character simply magnificent, I really like the way you put Axel and Roxas story in this, it was really interesting to read :)

Keep writing like this

There are no words to explain how much I Absolutly LOVED that fic. It was amazing in EVERY sense of the word.

Holy crap. This. Is. Fantastic. I couldn't tear my eyes off of it until I was done. Well done. I loved the way you captured different emotions with each different kind of alcohol. I love the last fight on the beach before Riku ran off for his four day binge. It was so emotional and powerful. Your style is so amazing.

...I have no words. No, okay, I haave words, but they sound a lot lik .

And that's verbatim.

Would you mind if I printed this out to keep it in my personal yaoi library? -hopeful-

Thanks again for doing what you do!

-Dawny