Reviews for Natural
animeanimal12 chapter 1 . 11/12/2019
I love your story, and there I feel like there needs to be more palletshipping like this out there.
Sea Anenome chapter 1 . 10/11/2019
Aww, of course the smut was smuttylicious, but the rest was also so cute?
Tilly chapter 1 . 6/17/2019
Omfg, this fic is literally the best one i've read so far, it took me awhile to find an actual good fanfic of ash x gary, so i'm really glad i found this when i did. The plot was great and the way you described everything ''too much'' was actually perfect, well for me atleast, so i thank you for writting such a great fanfic
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2019
Love it! It is amazing and I love how it you wrote it :)
The smut scene at the end was so loving too 3
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2019
That shit was fabulous
deaththekid.88.dtks chapter 1 . 10/18/2018
i really like I'm 10 out 10
KinosJourney chapter 1 . 6/9/2018
This was so cute.
Gayboi chapter 1 . 6/5/2018
thank you for making my dreams come true (;;)
LastHorror chapter 1 . 5/7/2018
This has been my favorite Palletshipping fanfics (along with one of my top Pokémon fanfics) ever since I discovered it. I keep coming back to re-read it. I thank you for making something as wonderful as this.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
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Yvonne Park chapter 1 . 3/31/2018
Those two are adorable! I love their cute little friendship as kids. So good! I wish there was more!Yvonne
AngelesPG chapter 1 . 12/17/2017
Claro cuando Gary decide dejar de acostarse con cualquiera vuelven a besarse como amantes mientras que Ash espera como idiota a su amigo y amor de la infancia inocente que decepción como Gary sabiendo que ellos eran más que amigos decide hacer esas cosas, no se necesitan palabras para respetar un lazo o relación tan especial que dices que tienen, solo espero que cuando Ash se entere se de cuenta del egoísmo de Gary
MurphytheFox chapter 1 . 12/12/2017
*Sniff* This is the best lemon i have ever read its so passionate, i am now following you!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2017
OMFG THIS WAS SUPER GOOD
Anonymous chapter 1 . 10/7/2017
This piece, was absolutely incredible. I loved how specific you had been, it was almost as if I was feeling each and every emotion they experienced. I personally, loved the Lemony goodness! I’ve secretly had a thing, when I was younger for Gary and Ash. You did an astronomical job! Don’t sweat if it was too many intimate details, because my friend it was Muy Perfecto!
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