Adored the prose and style. Fantastic.

Ahoy.
I think you are awesome for doing these stories, so cool and a little darker than the others. I simply love how they aren't those sweet idiots, and at the same time they are. I hope after 4 years you will receive this and maybe write some more.
although have a great day.

Hi.
I hope you know I stayed all night on tumblr looking for this.
And that I do not know how old this story is but WRITE MORE
THAT'S RIGHT. RIGHT NOW. CHOPCHOP.

(Seriously though I love this one little chapter to pieces)

Please tell me this isn't a one-shot! I friggin' love this!

Yesssssss! I love AUs, I love America, I love Belarus, and I love AmeBela.

Also, "Maybe she was secretly obsessed with marrying her older brother." PFT I'M LAUGHING WAY MORE THAN I SHOULD BE OH GOD HELP ME.

I crave a continuation of this. If you can ever get around to adding to this, I will love you forever.

I SO IN LOVE WITH YOUR WRITING AND I LOVE YOUR WRITING AND DID I JUST FALL IN LOVE WITH YOUR WRITING?

yes, yes i love you three times and i love your alfred and natalia and your idea and your writing. you gotta lend me your brain cuz it is freaking awesome and, babydoll.

genius.

babydoll is now the word of the week. and now i can say that i love you for your writing and your con!alfred.

you're amazing.

love,

~fuu

Wow. This is amazing. You wouldn't happen to be continuing this would you? Or was it just a oneshot? It was great either way. Very nice.

I love this. Like, you worded it in this unique, conversation-esque, total conman sorta way.

Babydoll. That's genius. That word, babydoll. Using it, totally genius.

Is this continued or..?

I love this. Like, you worded it in this unique, conversation-esque, total conman sorta way.

Babydoll. That's genius. That word, babydoll. Using it, totally genius.

Is this continued or..?

i love this.

i love your take on america.

i love your hipster-homeless-chic!belarus.

i love it. 33

This. Thisthisthisthisthis.

I want it so bad. Like, really. You're just sort of the most amazing person I've ever not met for actually writing this. Con!Man Alfred should have his own character tab-thingy.

I mean. C'mon.

Love.

So hey again and i'm sorry that i'm sosoSO LATE to review this, even though i read this for two times so, um, yeah.

First POV is definitely not my favorite and i have some reasons for that. BUT, THIS WAS FANTASTIC. YOU ARE FANTASTIC AND I FREAKING LOVE THIS AND I FREAKING LOVE YOU SO YEAH LOTS OF LOVE.

i love how you described all of this things and about natalia and all of them. Oh, and HOW DID YOU WRITE LIKE 3.000 WORDS AND THE CONVERSATION WAS SO TINY LIKE AN ANT BUT STIL FREAKING BEAUTIFUL? god, i want your brain like seriously, want. 'cause i'm soooo horrible with long fics orz

and i'm sure i kinda love the ending. I love cliffhangers :D

and why did you delete your SpaBel highschool!AU fic D: i want to review it since i saved the page in my opera mini (ha, opera mini) but you deleted it D:

okay i have to stop rambling right now.

AND I STILL LOVE YOU FOR YOUR WRITING

OH MY GOD

YOU

THIS

I DON'T EVEN

/dies

/revived

Because seriously? America/Belarus is like one of my het!OTPs.

It's cute and smarmy and asdfghjkl; you were wrong fuck ME why can't I write like this urghhhhhhh

/end incoherent review

you should add more. like how Alfred cons Natalia. It would be great!

ist a oneshot? :( it's great soo cool

you must continued pleASE? :D