Beautifully written and definitely different. Loved it.

Your work is so so beautiful. I could actually 'see' your little story on the screen, you know? This is what should have happened. I mean Luke and peyt just got married and never even spoke oir referred back to their problems. This was so realistic and perfectly written. I loved it. I hope to 'see' more of you on the leyton section ). I could defnitely do with more of your stories. Thanks for sharing.

omg, loved it. you were able to really express how we all felt they were feeling. can't wait to read more from you

i really loke this story. i think the way you wrote peyton was perfect.

great story, love it!

Excellent piece of writing which I have really enjoyed. I am glad that you didnt put too much emphasis on Lindsay's character as I was never a fan of hers, dont think there were ever too many of them anway! Just one little thing I want to say, there is a bit further down when you say they both waken up the next morning and they both felt as though a weight had been lifted from them and then you say Lucas was the first to wake up, its just a bit confusing when you read over it. Sorry for giving you a negative there but thought I should be honest, great story and hope you are going to update or write another story soon! Thanks for sharing, it was brilliant!