Twilight Zone episode 89 "To Serve Man." Hope Ron didn't figure out in time he was on the menu :-D

strictly speaking, commodore is not a rank, but an appointment to a captain in charge of several ships and is temporary

Now I was expecting this one to roll on towards a loose betrothal between Harry and Hermione

Seatbelts are compulsory in all seats in the UK in cars ...

Love this one!

Harry * that sound normal Ron is Retarted * ️

And then I blew the author’s head off with an elephant gun, took over the story, made Harry the champion of Hecate and Hermione her High Priestess, gave them levels of power equivalent to the Ghost Of Sparta himself, and set them loose to run absolutely RIOT on Magical Britain.

That’s what I do to authors whose stories piss me off to no end by doing stupid moves like having Harry die by a cruel trick of fate and having Hermione kill herself just so she can join him. I hijack control of their stories, give them alternate endings which often involve turning these two characters into a Gary Stu and a Mary Sue, respectively, and then personally ensure they get a happily ever after just so I can sleep properly at night.

Don’t worry, this chapter is so far the ONLY story of yours that has made me feel this way. All of your other work I absolutely love.

*giggles* let the may hem begin...:)

i absolutely love this!

i actually really liked this, it inspired be!

Nice reference to Chapter 13!

I literally thought this was an actual story and didn't realize it until chapter 7. Oh well! All of these were really good!

Alot more genius please?

As far as I'm concerned, it's not a sin to kill someone who has no soul. And anyone who willingly follows a psychopath like Voldemort is DEFINITELY someone who has no soul.

GO HERMIONE!