this was an emotional train wreck that I loved but did not need right before I go back to school. it was so good though! I couldn't stop reading it, it was so captivating!

This is honestly the best supernatural fan fic i have ever read and i think ive read them all :D I legit saw this and my eyes glanced to the 98000 words and went nope then i saw the summary and was like ill give this a try and now its 6 in the morning. I pulled an all nighter to read this cause it was so god damned good!

I love the dialogue in this story! Very much like Sam and Dean.

This story was like riding a train wreck. I frikken loved every minute of it! Please tell me you're thinking about a sequel. Because I would totally be there. You rock! I love Damaged! Dean and you killed it big time. Eagerly looking forward to more of your work.

*Arghhh* I want mooaaarrrr~
He did remember everything eventually, right?
Thanks for writing this :D

This should be an episode it's so good! Fantastic!

Once again, great story, though Sam and Dean have to be kind of Superhuman to resist all the pain and gunshot .
Loved it. :)

Wow. This is awesome. At the part of "gouge out your eyes" it totally reminded me of Kuroko No Basket.

Great Fic!

Awesome chapter and plot and amazing idea

I just finished this story! i LOVED IT! This would be an awesome episode. This was funny, gripping, charaters were right on and the ocs were great. Thanks so much for sharing!

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review: Novel/Comedy February 2016

This was quite an unusual Comedy in that there was no humor in the plot. You relied on dialogue - which was often pushed a bit too far - for comedic relief of a decidedly Action/Horror story. The banter between the brothers may have been in character, but it didn't always sit right for the situation they were in at the time.

I felt it a stretch for Brandon to be an actual ghost and still survive and Dr. Chris?...well, I suppose his unprofessional actions at the hospital were part of the Comedy?

One last thing. Chapter 15's Author Note. It took you almost four years to post this story. That's a lot of time and hard work you put into it. When these things happen - and they do, more than you know - you don't slap a band-aid on it, you do a revision. Your readers will understand and appreciate it. :)

This story was grammatically clean. I found little to no errors in punctuation, spelling or word usage.

Cat

Supernatural Fanfiction Monthly Awards Review: February 2016

This is probably one of the most realistic and spot-on comedies I've read in a while. Sam and Dean were their usual hilarious selves, but their banter revealed your excellent characterization. Your writing flowed well, and I found myself scrolling from chapter to chapter eagerly.

One issue is the large amounts of dialogue in some sections. I loved the emotion and energy of your scenes and arguments, but after a lot of back and forths it can lose the reader. Your dialogue was very well written, however, and I don't think this was much of a problem at all.

Great job! This was hilarious and well-written, a true find.

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review:
Interesting story, and written with obvious care, as there were little to no errors to be found here. The story itself, I think, was very good. I do, however, think you lost some of your excellent action sequences within the dialog, vis'a vie the tremendous amount of banter and repartee between the characters. This ultimately delayed the action, and sidetracked the inertia of your story. It also seems that there were slight liberties taken in the storyline which stretched the limitations of the plot that you'd set up (i.e.: Dean's non-verbal, but easy fix via the dream root- and Brandon's in a coma, but he's able to hunt as a spirit). You did, however, take those fixes from actual episodes, so I'm really not sure I should fault you for them, so I'm merely pointing them out to you. On the plus side: your original characters, both the good and the bad ones, are all very well drawn, and as a reader I cared very much about what happened to them. Your writing flows well, and your story kept me interested throughout. I'm quite happy to have been given the chance to read this.

Dan's got a secret and Sam knows it. I don't think it will take too long for Sam to figure it out.

Aw, thanks for finishing that one up! I'm glad you didnt end it with Dean getting his memory back (though I'm sure he will).