Reviews for Pyroclast |
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![]() ![]() TOUĆHE |
![]() ![]() Toućhe |
![]() ![]() * looks at her/him in concern * |
![]() ![]() aah it's really cool! please update soon :D i'll be waiting no matter how long it takes. ganbatte! |
![]() ![]() When I first read the summary I thought it would be how darren, as larten's assistant, would uncover the past. Turns out, it's so much better and less shallow than that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story, bro. Needs more Crepsely moments. Lol, jk. Although it would be nice. I really like this story. Its so original. |
![]() ![]() yaoi please |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE it! I wonder if everyone is still a vampire? I'm loving that Larten and Darren are so close, that they even know how much they care about each other in another life. SO well done. I cant wait for more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am very interested to see what happens next! You're style of writing is quite interesting. Your story has nice flow and a good amount of description, but sometimes you make very minor mistakes with your grammar, and occasionaly I think that some words are misused, for example, 'smashed the glass down'. If you meant that he literally broke the glass, that's fine, if a little strange. But if not, slammed would have been a better word. But this story is fantastic and is truly captivating, I'm hooked :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting! You caught my attention. What's going to happen? Updat! update! update! The a person |
![]() ![]() hello, plz continue this, i loved these last 4 chapters and i bet this fic could really go somewhere! :D:D:D |
![]() ![]() OMG O; continueeee!3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() OFY Kez in action /kicked |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tell you what~ your grammar has improved drastically since the first time I read your writing \o/ |
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