This was a nice, relatively short fanfic. I'd say that I hiope you continue it but since it looks like you haven't been on in years, I don't think there's much point.

please try elaborating on this one it would make a great story especially with your style of writing

Isn't Kanako a middle schooler? And a loli at that... Eh, whatever. Onto the next!

Hormonal teenagers.. Kyousuke and Ayase do look quite similar, similar enough to be siblings according to anime logic.

Favorite chapter of all :)

Wow! I love all of these one-shots! I can't wait for the next one!

Ever think of coming back to this I think it's the best fic of this series and really enjoyed the updates.

Great job! Not a lot of people can pull a story where 2 girls like the same guy and have a happy ending!

I kind of want to see a part 2 to this chapter. Hell, the premise alone could almost be it's own story.

... Well, that took me nearly all of the afternoon to go through, and somehow I still want more. Particularly, some Kanako and Saori moments.

Still, there are a number of ideas here that I can only dream of seeing as full length stories. I mean really, why has there been so little Yandere Kirino around here? It feels like such a perfectly reasonable outcome!

Or am I just weird like that? Anyway, hope you put out something like this again at some point.

YANDERE!

Just like in Mundane Pleasure you show us the old Kyousuke... at least he seems to be more the "awesome" Kyousuke then the normal one. That's no critic, I even think he will revert into his old self after the end of the story- the epilogue was suggesting that much.

Also he admits in the Kuroneko-Chapter of the twelfth novel that he still loves her, even though he loves Kirino more than her. Since I don't really think that Ruri would object a triangle-relationship, that also would work. Kirino may would be a bit grumpy, but also she could add Rudi to her collection, so I guess she would like that. And epicure can handle two woman: Well played.

I would like to see how he interacts with Manami in that AU of you. Will he turn back into his old self and try to impose her? Or do you see the same problems I see, with their dynamic with each other breaking down, leaving both of them behind hurting? I would like to hear your thoughts on that. Well, write on!

m.f.G.
Adept

This is how I felt when reading all the chapters of this fic so far:

"Help me!" I shouted, as I was pulled further from the earth and towards the emptiness of the air by an unknown force. It were as if there were a magnet pulling me somewhere in the somewhat eerie bottomless black pit below.
There was no answer.
"Help!" I shouted again, now kicking my legs and launching my arms forward to gnaw at the surface that could keep me from falling. It was then my legs were tugged away from the surface, leaving my nails to replace its purpose of struggling and setting a part of my senses all numb.
My head throbbed as I tried again to desperately pull myself up back onto the surface. Trying to sway my legs to gain momentum and possibly get a better grip, I filled my brain with the thought of doing the action. It was then that all the thoughts disappeared, staining my head white with its vacantness.
I couldn't move my lower body.
I gasped and tried again, before digging my nails deeper into the surface of the land and pulling. My mind couldn’t think of anything else to do and I ignored the cold and sharp pain the dirt was making as it got deeper into my nail.
"Help-!" I said again, but stopped midway when it was only my arms that were left holding onto my only hope of living.
Nothing happened and everything remained quiet as I was continued to be pulled into the empty darkness. My left arm then started to lose its grip on the surface, showing me a bit more of its dirty palm as it was pulled centimetre by centimetre away from the earth.
My heart started to pound hard in my chest, now feeling the urgentness of my current predicament. All the blood, that was once circulating around my entire body, then abruptly surged up to my skull, making me feel as if walls were surrounding and pulling closer to squish my already throbbing brain.
It was then my hand finally slipped off, losing all feeling as it fell limp to my side, no longer wanting to move or listen to me and taking all my blood with it. I felt empty and my brain now retired to its completely blank state. I wanted to shout for help again, but my throat wouldn’t listen. The only thing I could do now was stare at the remaining arm that kept a firm grip on the surface, though it did not really look like it was going to hold any longer.
"Help..." I finally uttered out in a soft whimper, before losing control of my jaw and not being able to move it any more.
It was then I sneezed, breath then hitching as I felt my other hand lose a bit of its grip. I stared up in desperation and saw that it was the dirt from pulling onto the earth that was falling onto my face and making me sneeze.
‘Save me…’ were the words that suddenly appeared in my mind out of nowhere, echoing and vibrating my skull, before it faded into the emptiness of my own mind. I blinked.
‘...from this cliffhanger…’ it continued as it then started leave too, fading into the darkness.
I was now left alone.

Nice, You should make a harem chapter.

Cool. Can you please write a chappie with Saori? I think she deserves some more facetime, don't you? Anyway, cool chappie. Have a muffin. From, Sir