Pls pls finish the story plsssssssss

An amazing story. You really got into the depth of their feelings. I really loved this story. I like the way that Carly acted, it brought something you dint see very often. PLEASE I'm begging you to finish your story.

You not finishing this story is like Sam not loving Freddie...it just ain't right

I don't understand this story. Is this b4 Sam and freddie meet again or what?

I stumbled on this story yesterday at work during break. Gibby made my afternoon.

WOW! How did I ever miss this story

Yeah, me in disguise I guess! lol

We went on a bit of a road trip yesterday. Left early, back late... you know. Anyway, I was looking for inspiration. This one did it again. Yep, dumped it into my tablet and had a fine read there and back again. Now I sound like a Hobbit in one of JRR Tolkien's works. However, I'm no Hobbit. I'm pretty sure I've already reviewed, so, there it is.

Well now... you went and did something that has eluded me forever. You gave Carly Shay some depth... and with an interesting take on older Carly. I think I'd like this Carly! Nice job!.

I've always written her as a throw away, or as a fourteen year old in a woman's body. You on the other hand fleshed her out... a tad. There's more lurking under this cigarette tokin' gal that I'd like to see. This may be the biggest twist I could imagine... and I can imagine HUGE twists!

Nice, very nice indeed Mr. WK.

You've earned a pat on the back and a side hug for this one.

B

Great Chapeter! Loved it! I'm glad to see Carly have more substance. A lot of fics I've read peg her as the always sweet, nice girl and she's so static and it makes her boring. But you gave her a brain (an intelligent, complex one) and a nicotine addiction?! (Can I just say that I'm sort of in love with this whole cigarettes thing. idk why. But I love it!) She's filled with so much more than just sweetness and you made her character more dynamic than just plain-jane, nice Carly who dates a lot of guys. (Though you did keep that canon element) and she's just great. "Men can be managed", that, my friend, should be a quote that every woman should know, put that on Tumblr, tweet it, I love that line so much! I can't wait to see a Carly-Sam (or Carly-Sam-Freddie) interaction with the multiple Carly's (Split Personality Disorder?). I sense a love triangle; not the typical The Other Girl Is A Total Conniving Bitch sort of thing because this doesn't seem that way and golly gosh I'm just in love with this chapter.

Great story

WOW!
That was NOT what I was expecting. At all. Now listen close my friend because I'm about to give you the biggest compliment I've ever shelled out in my fanfic career...you made Carly Shay interesting! Exciting even! I have never enjoyed either reading or writing Carly but here you give her layers (that she seems quite happy to...um...take off). I'm listening to her voice and actually believing her at times even though I know she's an unreliable narrator. Her view of the situations is screwed but it still offers an alternate perspective and it's a welcome change of pace.
I hoping you give us more on the Italy story. I have a feeling Ms Shay was quite a bad girl.
As always you did a great job of adding detail to scenes (Tom Harmon's family pictures, Carly wiggling to let him know they move easily).
I'm consistently amazed at how easy you make his look. Can't wait for the update!
Please excuse the typos...I'm on my phone.

Okay, let me give you my impression here about Carly. I like that she's complex, because hell we all are complex to varying degrees.

However, I just re-read your entire story here, and Carly needs to be a minor player. I'd hate for her to be further sullied; Dan Schneider did not do Carly any favors when he had her quietly sneak upstairs in iGoodbye so she could kiss the ex-boyfriend that Sam still loved. Nope, in that one ep she seemed like a selfish, calculating bitch.

I'm afraid you may toss her in the mix as a hard edged conniving whorish bitch. You have more than hinted at her interest in Freddie, and this iteration of Carly is only a half step away from using all her insights into Sam & Freddie to destroy Sam and ensnare Freddie for herself. I hope you don't; Carly has never been my favorite character, but I'd hate to see you so completely gut her essential decency.

Woah. Kudos to you for providing one of the most insightful reasons for the OOC iGoodbye kiss. Perfect, really. It gives depth in a place lots of us are bitter to look at.

"A pretty girl kissed him. How bad could that be?" A little iWTF nod, there?

Man, Dan Schneider is PAID to write this stuff, yet you're bringing out the potential out in these characters to lengths that put his to shame. In one chapter you turned Carly into someone realistic, someone more than just your average copy-cut-paste girly protagonist, someone I would root for. In these kid sitcoms, the teens are cute and "clever" and the adults are idiots. Carly here is grown up, manipulative, in a way that no TV show on Nick could ever portray.

The characters you have the power to create in your work beyond fanfiction are gonna knock readers out of the park.

Whether you update soon or update months from now, we'll all still be waiting with desperate eyes and heavy breathing. This is good stuff, man. If it were edible, I'd be in trouble.

you leave more questions unanswered than answered, and now i wonder whether Carly will be hitting on Fred and how he's going to handle this (popular guy, isn't he?) but overall it's a well written chapter and from from a female point of view to boot; you've come a long way (baby) from chapter two

Helloooi my dear its so wonderful to be reading from you again! ...you have such a descriptive genius that I cant get enough of, leaves me hanging on to your every word, and I'm secretly jealous of!...I mean do u think if I rub my face on the screen I might get a little on me? Is it weird that I was secretly a little Carly fan in this ch...the song Barracuda was literally playing in my head as i read the beginning... i loved all the little details on her ...wanna know why?...because it was so darn BELIEVABLE! ! And i was sooooo thrilled to read her squirming over Freddie its about time the tables were turned... and you my friend have a gift for last liners...always leaving me wanting more...and I could soooo picture the look on Freddie's face! Beyond exceptional work as always.