Hilarious! Well characterized as well.

Just Awesome.

Ha ha funny I liked it! Not too long, either. Write more stories like this!

Hahahahahahaha. xD

Lol, Dan is clueless. Good stuff, made me laugh, and it's an interesting style- having all dialouge, and you've managed to incorpriate a genrel idea of Dan's surroundings in said dialouge without it sounding clunky and expositional. The all dialouge style also works on the level that they're having a phone conversation, so no visuals being described to the reader makes sense. All in all, an enjoyable piece, Syberia. As to advice, I say just keep pushing through the tough paragraphs and keep exploring all those interesting angles you manage to find (in both writing styles and orignal, innovative ideas).

Live long and prosper,

Spock, er, PinkLemonade519 (who changed her Pen Name from SMKears)

Hahaha! That was really funny. :D

I loved it! XD

-Amy Stardust

Well that was odd. Note to self: brothers don't care about what you have to say.

XD Yep, he IS so dead. Haha, you've been on a roll with the funny lately, haven't you? Well, amazing job as usual! Keep it up; I'm still laughing. Brothers- what to do with 'em? :)

~Lily

Awesometastic as always, Syberia :)

Nicely done, Syberia. Obviously, this isn't one of your deep pieces. I liked the humor and over reaction in this one:)

Some might think that was a bit OOC for Ian, but I could totally see this happening. *Ballet drifts off to an alternative universe where all her dreams are true and unicorns eat those icky vegetables so you don't have to eat them*

Ahem. Although I am wondering about Dan's job. Somehow, I just can't seem him with a situation like that. The whole "work" job- I can't see him with a job like that.

It wad a nice piece. I liked it. And you shouldn't have to apologize for length. (39 Clues books are super short, but you don't see us complaining, do you?)

Bye!

-BR (NSP)

Oh joy! :D

I was actually thinking of writing something like this but I was too scared. o.o But you beat me to it, so... I won't be doing it then.

This was... humorous. I absolutely loved Dan! :D He's so awesome!

-CHILDISH SIDE-

HAHAHAHA, I so LURVE this! It was so FUNNY. [Better than I can do. Winkwink! ;)] DAAAAANNNNN!

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Okay, I think I'm done here. :) I'll be checking your other absurdly one-shot when I get some time. ;)

BYEZ~!

~Kaye _

Poor Amy and Syberian you are a fabulous writer I just love your stories!

This was funny! I'm glad you've taken a step out of writing dark and dramatic one-shots that are, nevertheless, incredibly beautiful. I really liked this, and I was smiling the whole way through this, which is rare.

When I saw this story posted on the archive, I read the summary and forgot to the read the category it was under. So, I read the summary and I was like, "Great, but doesn't Sy ever get tired of banging out these sad, but wonderful one-shots? Doesn't she ever try anything different?" I thought it was supposed to be in a serious mood again, but then the talk turned slang.

Good job!

~Wis