More and more I am convinced that I need to learn Japanese. I did not know about Teuchi's name, and that is frankly amazing.

fue muy buno el fic y me dejo re contenta,osea progreso de una manera en la que podes ver el crecimiento de los personajes hasta la aceptación de sasuke ,es un desarrollo que tiene sentido y progreso , verdaderamente te atrapa en la historia (también estoy siguiendo la otra de tetsuo)me encanto :D

I remember reading this fic back when it was first posted and have re-read the first entry and this one. After so many years I'm surprised I remembered the story so well, but goes to show how well written the story is. I think my favourite thing about this fic was that you did not make Naruto too over-powered, instead showing that he was ahead of the rest of team 7 simply because he had been in the field longer, as well as benefiting from a more supportive and less dramatic team. Also like how Naruto's talents had shifted due to a different Sensei. I can guess the next part will never be updated but I really enjoyed returning to this amazing story.

I really enjoyed this story, truly. The only problem I had with it was well, character development. Sasuke isn't, actually, that big of an asshole in canon, and while I do understand why he is so hateful to Naruto since Naruto has already surpassed him, it doesn't justify Kakashi's behavior to Sasuke. Kakashi of all people should understand how Sasuke feels, just like he did in canon...? if you get what I mean...? I just feel like Sasuke is very misunderstood in a lot of stories.

More forced drama bullshit because you're too stupid to do anything else.

Kyaaaa good hiashi or even a mildly good one is always a plus

Mei x zabuza is something I didn’t know i needed! Thanks

This jealous kakashi is so funny lol

This random flashback no jutsu that we already know is a drag to read tbh

Fire and lightning would probably make plasma if you’re going by pure science, because when you ad an electrical charge you heated gas you get plasma

To be continued in First Try: The Author Learned They're Trash.

Thank god you stopped writing.

Took this long for Chunin huh?

Maybe you're just too stupid and the people that tell you your stories are anything but trash, are as retarded as you. God. You are a stupid fucking retard. Goo fuck yourself and your retarded 600 stories.

This is garbage.

Garbage. Garbage.

Garbage.